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Nescient

The nescience of hasty judgment
Opinions formed by fear
A parade of ignorance
Why stop to empathize
Just label them defective
Terribly misguided
Not normal
As if normal has been defined
As if such knowledge exists
A man can't be attracted to another man
A woman can't be attracted to another women
Love cannot be found between two of the same gender
But why not?
Love can barely be found between two of the opposite gender
Let love be found wherever it can
Let attraction lie in the eyes of the beholder
Identify someone just for who they are
Not who they are attracted to

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Written September 2nd, 2006

A contest entry

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  • Elenore
    September 3, 2006
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    first, thanks for the contest,it's a well deserved topic. and i'm glad you like my poem.


  • Elenore
    September 3, 2006
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    thank you so much. i'm glad you enjoyed it.


  • Masquerading Angel
    September 2, 2006
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    I agree with rana, you said it all in one line. Your poem was straight to the point, and worded well. Thank you for your entry. I completely agree with you. And when you wrote "Love can barely be found between two of the opposite gender
    Let love be found wherever it can" You made the point I have been trying to make my whole life. Great job!
    ~Stephanie


  • Apsinthion
    September 2, 2006
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    "As if normal has been defined" you have said it all right there!
    amazing poem
    you couldn't be more right in every thing u have said.. specially at the end..
    thank you for this amazing poem ...
    best of luck in the contest...
    this is truely a wonderful heartfelt poem that just made me wana stand on my chair and applaud to the amazing poet that has penned it...
    thank you again..

    much love

    ~rana~