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rift

lips pursed, sleepers, keepers of ancient secrets
stretching far into the weight of your inexistent voices
undefined knowledge
undefined hope

she peers up, eyes contemplative, head cloudy
and you smile

omniciently

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Written September 1st, 2006

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  • tinuviel
    September 2, 2006
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    inexistent... i like it *smiles*