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some place i love

the place simalar to a castle
with dark grey stone walls
hidden from muggles
and protected by the most powerful magic
inside these walls is a place of magic
some place that i love

with revolving staircases
and potrtaits that move
with hundredes of classrooms
millions of students
i stop to smell the smell of a phoenix
i loved this place
it was my home away from home
some place i love

even though homework is extreme a
and even though that the teachers are strict
this will always be the place i love
the place that is a big apart of my life
my home away from home
some place i loved

********

some years went by in my home away from home
but i cherished this place more than ever
then a catstraphe happend
to my home away from home
that endangered if i would ever return
to some place i loved

the chamber of secrets was opened
and a monster was unleashed
attacking muggle-borns left and right
or so it seemed
parents were furious
and took their kids out
to some place i love

a group of students went down their
and a teacher too
battled the monster
and saved an endangered girl
the teacher was harmed
but the students were not
and the place i loved was saved
by a group of second years
to some place i loved

**********

another year went by
and i returned to my school
to the place i cherished
my home away from home
i went back to some place i loved

a killer was on the loose
and students were afraid
but not too afraid
because the headmaster was on their side
that is until
the killer got into some place i love
and going after one child
to get his revenge

people were afraid
so was i
i cant remember a darker time
the killer escaped with a scence of relief
and hatrid
but their were rumers that he was innocent
though most didnt belive it.
another danger
to some place i love

*************

the next year was a good one
with much entertainment
there was a compettion
in which 3 students from 3 schools
would compete
but there were 4 two frome some place i love
i went for both of them
me being quite shy
this happend to some place i love

it went quite smoothly
except for those 4
for life threatning situatuions they had to get past
to get glory that would last
to some place i love

then the third was the worst
for the 4 was trapped in a maze
we couldnt see a thing
then when the first two from the place i love came back
1 was dead
most didnt know at first
then we heard a scream
at some place i love

the survivor said that he was back
the one we all fear
a select few belived it
but most didnt
that he ordered for the one to be killed
but that was hard to believe
and people believed he was crazy
but only his closest friends believed
to some place i love

the next year he was proved true

***********

then some time went by
and now i think that some place i love
is at an end
the year went by the smoothest
unlike other years
but at the end the most terrible thing happend
to some place i love

the headmaster was killed
by a professor
most say that he did this
for his own  reasons
but this may be the end

because this mas was the only one
that the feared one ever feared
but he was gone
and some place i love
cannot be protected without him
this may be the end to my home away from home





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Written September 1st, 2006

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  • Tabitha-Robin
    December 4, 2006

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    Great

    This is a wonderful written. Keep the pen flowing and your heart moving.

    I stoped by to ask if you would place a poem of yours on the reading page of the group "Faith Seekers". I know I have been away for a while but I am back and hoping to get everything back in order now. God bless you and hope to hear from you soon.

    Tabitha-Robin


  • nova4eva
    September 4, 2006
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    this was in my perspective as if i was at hogwarts as a random student
    ~Nova


  • loveXcorpse
    September 2, 2006
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    yeah was this in your perspective or chos. thats actually a good question to ask. haha. uhmm yeah this was good. great write and it actually went a long with the books and the movies.
    =]


  • HorseRidinBbe07
    September 2, 2006
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    is this from cho's perspective? i got that through the going for 2 people from hogwarts- harry and ced. lol- was just watching/getting annoyed at goblet of fire