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Thank you

A heart of ink
Black ink
The paper of my heart
Thorn apart by the pen
The pen of fear

You glued it
Every cut carefully healed
All of your patience
Was your needed donation

You coloured it
The colours made the black disappear
The scars could no longer be seen
And easier forgotten

How can I thank you
From collecting
The bits and pieces of my heart
To save my soul from falling
Falling into the deep dark gap
Called isolation


Thank you, dear Sannet,
For being the friend I needed

Author notes

I made this for a very good friend of mine, who helped me whenever I was down.
Written September 1st, 2006

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  • morgana raven Greeters member
    September 1, 2006
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    i like the description in this, this is a brilliant write. and a brilliant peom for a friend
    great work
    laura