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Follow me to the ends of this world,
you'll regret it.....
you'll regret it.....
because you know me no more.
for I'm all alone.
again.
see time fly by,
hold your hands to say goodbye,
for I'm gone and'll ne'er come back
(and though your heart is broken, so is mine)
and bid me goodbye silently and with a smile.
for we'll meet some day,
at the end of your eternity......


                               ......while I'm forgotten......
......in time......
                  ......and space.....

                ......forever......

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Written September 1st, 2006

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  • i want a few weeks of free membership, so i'm commenting a lot ^_^ congratulations on being victim/volunteer number one.

    and oh my god. ripperbunnypuppy writes better than my husband...
    shhhhhhh dont tell him!!

  • angaus
    September 12, 2006
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    two thumbs up

    very good

  • RavenDragonmind
    September 8, 2006
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    U RELATE TO IT ALL THE WAY??? i dont belive it.


  • FlyingXDaggers
    September 6, 2006
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    woo!!

    hmmm.... what have you been up to bro?? just kidding, i really really like this and relate to it all the way, keep it up!!

  • RavenDragonmind
    September 3, 2006
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    thnx

  • Headstrong2TakeUOn
    September 2, 2006
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    I like this one a lot better, flows better and, I would say, more direct in a complicated way

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