" Angel's Lullaby "
When your life hits a bump
And you don't know what to do
Always keep your faith up high
And know I have faith in you
You're always in my prayers
I keep you close at heart
And forever in my thoughts
It's not your turn to part
You have an angel on your side
She sits so quiet and still
Perched upon your bedside
As you fight for the power and will
We know the road is slow
And we know it will be hard
Luck and faith is all you need
To hold that special card
We pray to the heavens above
Come back to us please
Put our minds to rest
And let our hearts feel ease
You know your needed now
As your angel sits and sighs
This is what it sounds like
With the Angel's Lullaby
Written By: Donna J. Hoyt
Date: August 31, 2006
for: My Daddy (Donald Rogers)
Author notes
umm ... my dad was in an automobile accident (he was on his motorcycle) on saturday 8/26/06 ... he is in ICU with bruiseing on the right side of his brain ... as i was spending time with him and watching him ... this poem just kinda came to me ... i hope everyone enjoys it ...
Written August 31st, 2006
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Strong powerful and emotional! Such a wonderful touching poem written from deep within the heart. I hope your father is doing better. Again this is really a lovely emotional write, such beauty within your words.
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To be completely honest, while the rhyming was very nice, and the poem itself was very smooth and formed well at the end - the bigger picture of this, the moral, the meaning, is overdone many many times. I understand if it's important to you, but it does indeed seem very redundant to me, and prevents me from really liking the poem in its entirety. -
It is such a beautiful lullaby. I am sorry to hear about your father. That is so sad. I hope he pulls through. Angels are all around us not only in timnes of need.
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wow this was wonderfull
so beatifully written!
you gave words such a great meaning
"You have an angel on your side
She sits so quiet and still
Perched upon your bedside
As you fight for the power and will"
that was the best verse in my opinion! i hope my angel is watching me that closely couse i thikn i need her now! -
Shoooo what abeatiful poem. So indepth .
You sure gave these word's meaning. I loved the word's and that you still have this much faith.
God Bless your Father, and you. -
very good
You know your needed now
As your angel sits and sighs
This is what it sounds like
With the Angel's Lullaby
wow, this is wonderful, the sweetness,
tenderness with which this is written.
and the very image of an angel sighing
is truly beautiful.
I am sorry for your father, I will keep
you and your family in my thoughts and
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It really warmed my heart with its warmth and kindness and love - really well described throughout! Hope he gets well soon! I really do! Blissful Princess
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very beautiful poem, i loved it! the rhyming its very nice, not forced, and the flow of it is very smooth as well. I love poems of hope, i guess because im somewhat a negative person, and i myself cant really write hopeful poems. keep the ink flowing!
S.C
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The point of this poem comes across very well and I dont care if the rhyme is slightly off or whatever the fact that you have written it for your father is so touching. I do not have a great relationship with mine and therefore feel that you are so lucky to have one you care so much about which is obvious fro this poem Well done and I hope things improve for you and your family very soon. Love Claire
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You know, it's not about rhyme or rhythm. Personally, to hell with someone that OCD about it. It's about the expression and the thought you put into it with your emotions. Therefore, you have done well with it. It's something right now that would be perfect to say to a very close and special friend of mine right now, letting them know everything will be alright. Very well writ, mate!
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The rhyme was off (especially in some places), but the poem was good. It is interesting to see how you have done. I do suggest going through the rhyming and correcting it a little...it just could add so much to a poem like this, to have good rhyming
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Beautifully Written!
This is beautiful... I know it means a lot to you because you wrote this for a purpose! -
wow! i love love loved it!
"You have an angel on your side
She sits so quiet and still
Perched upon your bedside"
i absolutely loved these lines!...it brings such a perfect image to my mind
I hope your dad is going to be alright, Its terrible when these things happen...
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Wow!! You know it's a good write when someone reads it and feels like their right there with you!! You did a wonderfull job letting this emotion come through!!! I love it.
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Great write
Really lovely poem this. It is a poem of Hope, deep hope and faith. Great write. Well done -
at one time or other we all face such situation.so we can identify with yours .it is nice to have a powerful faith,so that we can pull thru life .well written poem
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We all need an angel by our side now and then. I pray for your dad and you as you go through this with him.
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beautifully written
This is a very beautiful write. It flows and touched my heart. Brought tears to my eyes. How are things now with your Dad?
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This poem really touched me. In more words than one. It is a tragic thing that happened to oyur dad and I pray he pulls through. God bless you in your time of need.
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This poem really touched me. In more words than one. It is a tragic thing that happened to oyur dad and I pray he pulls through. God bless you in your time of need.
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touching
this poem touched me since i am beside you through this whole ordeal... I stand be your side and know that if you need me Im but an arms length away... Dad will be ok he is very stubborn.. Anyway to show how much i enjoyed this poem I am going to sponser it...
love you,
Love me
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