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Application of a Person you need in your LIFE throughout! =)

I'll be your friend,
And cuddle you till the end.

We'd share many thoughts,
And for our enemies, we'd build many plots!

Being a true friend is to listen,
But being an untrue friend is when you whistle.

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Well.. SunshineFaerie I'd LOVE to be your Dearest Friend!

**$h@Mz**
Written September 1st, 2006

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  • October 22, 2006
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    Awesome!!!!!

    Ohhh man! I love all your works dammmit! Well, anyway.. this is another gr8 piece.. You should THANK God that he gave you so much talent.. and I know you do! Anyway, I love these lines..-

    Being a true friend is to listen,
    But being an untrue friend is when you whistle.

    AMAZING man.. I really don't know how you write such AWESOME stuff! KEEP IT UP!

    Nida


  • shuvi
    October 2, 2006
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    A+

    Nice, very sweet and cute and naive! Theres something so very appealing in ur poems, as in, they may be really short but they are so nice to read...cheers, shuvi!!!

  • Surrender n survive
    September 13, 2006
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    sweet !

    Your poems surely show the sweetness that mature poems dont have and that makes it different for all of us ! This poem is way cute and so intresting! Thanks for entering and good luck...
    PREETI


  • September 11, 2006
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    wonderful

    Great poem Shamz!!!! This poem makes me miss you more than I already do!!!!
    I'm always there to listen


  • Abidoodle333
    September 2, 2006
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    god bless
    SF


  • Keith Drew gold member
    September 1, 2006
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    Excellent

    I can't whistle little bird of love, but I can listen!
    How true your words are.
    Well done!


  • naked roots
    September 1, 2006
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    Aww, you are a wonderful friend. and such a sweet girl! Sends smiles your way, and some good luck for the contest!


  • masterblaster gold member
    September 1, 2006
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    Hi, this is very sweet and so true,good friends do listen, a big hug , you have my applause, hugs Di


  • mysticstorm gold member
    September 1, 2006
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    Very cute and sweet, hun. You would be a very good friend to anyone. The would be honored to have you as one.
    You are so sweet and loving.
    Best of luck in the contest!


  • Kandy Floss
    September 1, 2006
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    nice! i love this new poem! i dont get the last part though but i like it lol xxxxxxxxx

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