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that's all life was to him,
a click away
simplicity, absurdity
profound as the universe
in a nutshell

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that's all life was to him,
a snap, a jolt
of the synapses;
a push of a button
where in a fraction
of a second's infinitesimal fraction
tide rushes in
sun flares up
life blooms

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mortal minds
with mortal woes
cannot in their fragile infancy
comprehend
this mystery,
this sound, so precious
so miniscule
so brief, succinct,
when God switched on
the light, and
life, as we know it,
began and ended
with a

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Author notes

Maybe it's related to that Adam Sandler movie, but then again, maybe not. Just a bit of stress relief tonight.
Written September 1st, 2006

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  • writonthebody
    September 18, 2006
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    well- I didn't pick up the adam sandler hints.... but I don't think the piece loses anything because of it. This could be interpreted in a variety of ways. Most of them quite profound and deep, and having nothing to do at all, with remote controls.

    v. well done.