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Be Careful What You Wish For

troubled is this mind you seek
forgotten are the words
i search for peace in this land of war
and find bitter sweet nothingness

vanquished emptiness fills my soul
and my heart breaks a little more
i try so hard to breath
but for some reason it hurts

nonsense are these words i speak
i'm not exactly sure what they mean
wishing i could understand myself
but fairytales don't come true.

Author notes

havent wrote in a while... i believe it shows
Written August 31st, 2006

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