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At times like this
there are only a few words
that can faintly express how we truly feel.

It’s been many years now,
but you can’t erase
your impact on our hearts.

May you live eternal
in the hearts of those who loved you.

May you smile
when you hear us sing.


We have shed our tears,
and whispered our prayers,
in hopes of our love reaching you.

I hope you found what you were looking for.
Rest in peace dearest Pink Spider.

Our love is always with you.

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December 13, 1964 to May 2, 1998.

I felt inspired so I wrote.
Written August 31st, 2006

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  • kill the lights
    September 28, 2007
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    I loved your screen name so I can to read you rshit and it's awesome


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    November 10, 2006
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    A very very good piece of writing

    A good piece of writing here. This is a very sweet poem indeed.
    Well done for this.


  • The Existentialist
    September 5, 2006
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    this was awesome. great job. glad to seeing again you writing again

  • Ninque-Aiwe
    August 31, 2006
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    Hmm. Were you inspired by that video you said you watched that made you cry? About Hide's death. 'Tis a very sweet poem - I wish I knew more about why you call him the pink spider.


    His birthday is the same as mine. hehe.