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I love Inside The Dark



the day is done
we have put away our chores


 

now comes our friend
the night
a twilight to cover our sins


 

i see in your eyes
a playful mind
the one i love so well


 

without a word you disappear to your closet
in a moment,  you have your favorite mink


 

i adore the richness of you in that coat
the mixture of your body and soft fur, is heavenly


 

your gaze tells me where to go
i am there for you
to make you move for me


 

by candle, your face is so lovely
your body a plush satin pillow
a mixture of firm and soft surfaces

i can not caress you enough


a secret signal, known only by us
tells me what you really want


 

fingers entwined
i grasp your hands
placed slowly above your head


 

you want to be secured
to loose control, and test my trust

again

 

i give you, as you wish
bound and panting in passion


 

let me control the kisses
the touches
the places where i may have you


 

plea that i may take you
and i will


the night will go on for us
filled with the sounds of love and lust 


 

you bind me more than i hold you
your spell is all i know
i am yours, at your will


i love the night

i love inside the dark

i love you




LeeL


 

Author notes

My name is Rick. (Endeavor)

This is my version of sensual... I just found out, this became a Gold in the Contest "Blisfully Sensual"
Written August 31st, 2006

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  • John Veinot Sr.
    May 31
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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 17

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    Wow.. sensual indeed! Vivid images are created inside my mind reading this...

    Very passionate indeed.. I love this!


    • Endeavor gold member
      May 17
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      Jacks


      Thank you for feeling my words

      We all have our touch points

      It is all wired

      Rick

  • M a r l u x i a
    February 25

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    The whole time I was reading this, I envisioned something like a fairytale or something out of a book. This was written with style, and every line just rollarcoastered... meaning, it all just seemed to flow and keep going & going... Great poem!

    Thanks for entering your write in "Enter All Your Love Writes Here!", and good luck!

    M a r l u x i a

  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    December 20, 2007
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    Wow...this piece totally blew my mind away!!

    I like the way it told a story....sweet...


    • Endeavor gold member
      December 20, 2007
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      Hi Kat


      Thank you for caring for my words

      You may like "Forever and a Day" or "I Will"

      Thank you for reading me

      Rick

  • ears2hearyou gold member
    October 10, 2007

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    delicately written balancing the

    beauty and lovemaking without making it too raw, so we
    could enjoy the couple making love to each other instead
    of just rantings of sexual cravings.
    Really smartly done too with exquisite feeling.
    It truly is a GOLD TROPHY POEM.
    Erotica writers the really good ones, are just so awesome
    with their words, they balance the image with the pace,
    and the pace with the emotion ......it's breathtaking
    so much to learn.
    ears2hearyou
    Kathleen : ))


    • Endeavor gold member
      October 10, 2007
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      Hi Kathleen


      My goal is always to place you in the room
      as if the reader is with me

      I always do a Set-up to create the enviorment

      Thank you for likeing my work

      Rick

  • Dragons Lady
    September 16, 2007

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    Sensual with class

    This is a stunningly visual masterpiece of words. I do love this and can't see how any woman wouldn't. It is romantic and tender, flowing with desire and passion laced into each silken word as it caresses the reader. Very nicely done. A velvet pen you have. Well deserved gold.


    • Endeavor gold member
      September 16, 2007

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      Shadow


      Your comment is poetry in it`s self

      I was pleased with the Gold

      Thank you for reading this

      Rick
  • Samantha Amergirdol
    September 5, 2007

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    A very passionate write out of true love, that it is wonderful to have someone to share that with. Nice write!

    thanks for entering!

    • Endeavor gold member
      September 16, 2007
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      Samantha


      So pleased you liked this

      Passion is the energy that drives our relationships, and bonds our commitment

      Rick

  • ennovy silver member
    September 3, 2007

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    Mmmmmmmm!This such a deep emotional read, that it makes you remember all there is to desire, I wish all men this happiness. Complete passionate beauty found in the arms, of a very special lady. Your are and always will be the true romantic. I enjoyed this read and I could feel the warmth, come off the page..need I say more? Thanks for sharing it dynamic work of art..........Novy

    • Endeavor gold member
      September 3, 2007
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      Novy


      Like your opening word... lol

      I am a romantic, love leaves me no choise

      Thank you for feeling my words

      Rick

  • Jalalbel gold member
    July 26, 2007

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    Beautiful!

    You loved me not at all, but let it go;
    I loved you more than life, but let it be.
    And as the more injured party, this thing being so,
    The hour's amenities are all to me-
    The choice of weapons; and I gravely choose
    To let the weapons tarnish where they lie;
    And spend the night in eloquent abuse
    Of senators and popes and such small fry
    And meet the morning standing, and at odds
    With heaven and earth and hell and any fool
    Who calls his soul his own, and all the Gods,
    And all the children dressed for school...

    Smile smile smile, O writer of soft wispy romance and beautiful dreams.
    Judy


    • Endeavor gold member
      July 26, 2007
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      Judy


      I love your comment as words
      I have to realy think to get it all back to the lust you just read

      I think I may have done that
      Thank you for liking my words

      Rick

  • azlyn gold member
    June 30, 2007
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    This is a lovely write...I had read it earlier. Do you have more like it for me to enjoy? I very much admire your writing. You offer such class and feeling to the erotic write. Makes a lady feel like a lady. I write some erotica...but I am not wonderful at it...as you are. I have some on my page..."THIS NIGHT" and "FEEL ME" and others that are older. If you would like to send me a few links to poems you feel would be enticing to me, I will certainly read them.
    Blessings and Peace,
    Azlyn

  • azlyn gold member
    June 13, 2007

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    This was so sensual and full of love. Playful and stimulating...yet tasteful and classy. I loved the way you incorporated the "night" into the context of the write. Excellent write!
    Blessings,
    Azlyn


    • Endeavor gold member
      June 30, 2007
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      azlyn


      Sorry I missed your comment

      I thank you for feeling my words

      Love sensual

      Rick

  • coffeeangel316
    June 13, 2007
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    Hot I loved it It was a really good write


    • Endeavor gold member
      June 13, 2007
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      Coffee


      Thank you

      I try to write close to the edge and not fall to far

      The words do not exceed the experance in life

      I thank you

  • PonderingPoetess
    May 19, 2007

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    You want to be secured
    to loose control, and test my trust

    again

    Brilliant! I can feel the want and longing in these words, but more than that, I can feel your inherent desire to please that I am coming to find leaked into most of your work...I found this to be extremely sensual, with just enough visual to set the tone of romance and sensuality.

    • Endeavor gold member
      May 19, 2007
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      Poetess


      Thank you for saying Brillaint

      Thank you for seeing the trend in my writing
      that is the advantage of writing from life..
      reality sometimes exceeds fanticy

      I appreate your candid comment... Rick

  • Angel With No Halo
    April 14, 2007

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    This was absolutely beautiful. Such a wonderful flow. the ambiance of the poem was amazing and sensual. Thank you so much for entering this lovely piece. Good luck in my contest

    ~Krys~


    • Endeavor gold member
      April 14, 2007
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      Hi Krys

      The words of this were created from life
      as is my pratice in writing

      If it is sensual, it is because of the dominate love over the act. She became my secound wife, so the words are incased in care, as well as her personel preferances.

      I thank you for your thoughts

      Rick

  • Thankfulspirit
    April 9, 2007

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    WOW! So sensual and so beautiful! Flowed so gently into me with absolute tenderness....enjoyed this so much! Thanks for entering this in my contest. Good luck...smiles, Terry

    • Endeavor gold member
      April 14, 2007
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      Sweet Terry

      Thank you for your gracious comment

      I read this slowely, almost above a whisper

      Like this

      Flowed so gently into me with absolute tenderness

      Rick


  • panegyric ink
    March 25, 2007

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    this is a gold evertime Rick!!!!!!

    this is like reading into the ultimate romance between two soulmates that were always destined for eachother. overall, i love the way you journey us through your thoughts toward your love. i know i am incapable of such surroundings and the imagery you have associated between the two of you and all the elements you have thrown in just in the right moments. and that makes you real. this is indeed your real self. your soul Rick.

    Man, it sucks when i know i'll never write this well!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -bri.


    • Endeavor gold member
      March 25, 2007
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      Hi Bri

      Nice opening rhyme

      You read this as clearly as any
      Your comment telles me what you are capable of

      If you just write as your comment
      you will find the words

      Just write without fear and make it soft

      Rick

  • ennovy silver member
    March 17, 2007
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    Brilliant , Sensational Poetry

    be still my heart, for this real love. You have capture the essence of a womans needs. With tender words, flowing like warm sweet honey...you have touch the soul of this poetess. Excellent poetry of beautiful moments in time. Write ON!......Novy


    • Endeavor gold member
      March 17, 2007
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      Thank you

      Your comment is near verse

      I thank you for your thoughts

      If you were touched, it is because you were able to climb into the verse and feel the words

      Rick

  • Nature Song silver member
    March 14, 2007

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    Well deservng of the gold indeed. Wow, knocked my socks off! Have to say you have a sensous flair with those words.....~Sie

    • Endeavor gold member
      March 14, 2007
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      Sie

      I think it had the correct effect

      I wrote these words
      for my past wife from life

      She had her gifts as well

      Thank you for reading me

      Rick

  • mysticstorm gold member
    March 8, 2007

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    Sensual and loving! A wonderfully done tastful write, with words of elegance. So many beautiful words and lines you have penned. I could not pick a favorite part for it is all lovely.
    Nicely done!


    • Endeavor gold member
      March 8, 2007
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      Mystic

      So pleased you like this
      that says a lot to me as insite

      Thank you for saying Beautiful
      Thank you for reading my words

      Rick

  • XxGoldenxXDawnxX
    March 5, 2007

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    Sensational

    you bind me more than i hold you
    your spell is all i know
    i am yours, at your will


    Your words are like magic... your lust intense hidden within words of a dream..

    You caress womens hearts, minds and bodies with words alone..


    • Endeavor gold member
      March 5, 2007
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      Hi Angel

      Thank you for reading this

      I like the word Sensational

      I am working on a secound book
      "Make love to me in words"

      Perhaps you will be interested

      Rick

  • AngelDreamer
    March 3, 2007

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    you did not fallow the rules in the contest you did not put your option number or angel in your comment box.

  • Amai Kanashimi
    February 28, 2007
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    you bind me more than i hold you
    your spell is all i know
    i am yours, at your will






    i love the night




    i love inside the dark



    i love you....these lines speaks the whole poem. sensually written. there is a story behind to tell...good work!


    • Endeavor gold member
      March 1, 2007
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      Rose

      Thank you for liking my work

      I wrote this for my secound wife
      She made us both exceptional

      That is enough to say

      Rick

  • Sokarjo
    February 28, 2007

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    "you bind me more than i hold you
    your spell is all i know"

    Love those lines the best.

    Fantastic write... thanks so much for entering it into my contest! Good luck!

    • Endeavor gold member
      February 28, 2007
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      Sokarjo

      Thank you for your thoughts

      I like that as well

      The closer you read the more you will find

      This woman became amazing

      I later married her

      Rick

      • Sokarjo
        February 28, 2007
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        What a great ending to the story! Congratulations.

  • Spiritvision angel
    February 12, 2007

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    "Now comes our friend the night ,a twilight to cover our sins" The darkness of night love hides us from sin yet, the twilight lights our way towards the other."I cannot carress you enough" Oh, the passion turns up the heat in this write!! "plea that I take you and I will" Intense feeling of deep, burning love with another that see's the future only with you!! One can feel the love flo out of this poem Rick!!


    • Endeavor gold member
      February 28, 2007
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      Hi Angel

      I did not know you had read this

      I think you felt the words well

      My dream was to please this woman

      I thank you

      Rick

  • Sacrificial Love
    January 25, 2007

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    Breathless....

    You have captured the epitome of the a Dom/sub relationship. The sub may give the gift of his/her submission to the Dom...but the one who is actually bound and controlled is the Dom...for He is completed addicted to and consumed by the passion of her submission.

    So very subtly erotic...I am incredibly turned on by this piece.

    • Endeavor gold member
      January 25, 2007
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      Heidi

      I am in agreement with all you say

      This can be an addictive gift

      Very compelling

      Thank you for reading

      Rick

  • Lonewolf2008 gold member
    January 14, 2007

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    Wonderful write

    How exciting to have that love and feelings, that only you two know and enjoy. A very private thing that make love-making even more thrilling and exciting. thanks for sharing. Jules.


  • Providence
    January 9, 2007
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    Actually, I was refering to a comment made yesterday. But thank you for sending this. I agreed with the readers this is a warm and sensuous write and except for the fur coat the imagery was dream-like.
    Marianne


    • Endeavor gold member
      January 9, 2007
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      Hi Marianne

      Glad you liked this

      Sorry the fur bothers you

      Thank you for saying warm and sensuous

      Rick

  • Endeavor gold member
    January 9, 2007
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    < Sweet Brat

    I am always learning and open to your sugestions

    As you know, I always write from life

    Deb love this way with me

    Just so you know, I used my own silk ties

    She made the knots to her pleasure

    Life is all volentary

    I thank you for reading and feeling my words

    Rick

  • zochit2me gold member
    January 9, 2007

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    Certainly worth it

    Well worth the gold trophy it represents Rick...very good poem. Descriptive and very intoxicationg. So glad you got a gold for it. You are a wonderful poet.
    Becky

  • wings of an angel
    January 9, 2007
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    This is a very good poem that you have penned here dear poet


    • Endeavor gold member
      January 9, 2007
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      Angel

      Sorry I don`t know your name to use it here

      Thank you for reading my words

      This is slitely edgey

      For somthing softer, please read "My Secret Heaven"

      On my Authors Page

      Rick

  • clarinetchick1929
    January 8, 2007

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    I loved this. You can tell how much you really care for your wife in this poem. And thanks again for being my AP dad.

    - Cait -


    • Endeavor gold member
      January 9, 2007
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      Cait

      Thank you for your kind words

      Take care in what you read

      Stay sweet...lol

      Your AP Dad


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    December 22, 2006

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    Ah and it is so very sensual and beautiful. It makes a woman sigh as she reads it. It is definitely Gold for sure. Congratulations. Jeannie

  • Blazing White Wolf
    December 22, 2006

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    this is very sensual and loving. Had a nice flow and feel to it. Erotic yet gentle like a feathery touch upon lushed skin well done
    love and light,
    Blaze

  • Mary Nagy
    December 22, 2006

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    I can certainly see why this poem won a gold trophy! You manage to express the love and passion without being vulgar (I appreciate that in poetry). Excellent poem! Sincerely, Mary

  • LittleLottie
    December 22, 2006
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    it was interesting,
    im young so i really shouldn't be reading that but it was good


    • Endeavor gold member
      December 22, 2006
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      Lottie

      This is marked Adult

      How did you get axcess

      Your being bad young lady

      I forgive you this once

      Rick
  • angelcalled666momma
    December 21, 2006
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    beautifull!!

    i read this piece several times,just deep in imagination. its beautiful Lee


    • Endeavor gold member
      December 21, 2006
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      Hi Angel

      Thank you for reading several times

      That is the best complement

      I thank you

      Rick

  • michellemybelle gold member
    December 21, 2006

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    excellent

    it was nice to see this again...
    intimant and passionate
    sensual in the most beautiful way
    you find such perfect words to describe making love


    • Endeavor gold member
      December 21, 2006
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      Hi Michelle

      Thank you for reading

      Lovemaking is the most anavilistic act we do
      it is where our passion leeps beyound reality

      I have been blessed with wonderfull women
      My words will always fall below the experance

      Rick


  • GorgeouslyBroken
    December 21, 2006

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    Beautiful!

    So beautiful and lovely! You did a wonderful job as you always do on your poems of love!
    With Love,
    Molli


    • Endeavor gold member
      December 21, 2006
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      Molli

      Thank you for reading

      Nice of you to like all my words

      Happy you found love

      Enjoy life

      Rick

  • Cannonsfire silver member
    December 21, 2006

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    Can't abide the thought of real fur! Yuk, but if I skip that visual the rest is pleasant to the thoughts. Can we have fake fur, pleeeeeese!

    • Endeavor gold member
      December 21, 2006
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      Cannonsfire

      I respect you thoughts about fur
      As a practical matter
      We are all using what is around us in the world
      It is permitted in the bible
      John the Batipist appears wearing a fur
      I would not give a woman a fake Diamond or a fake Fur or a plastic Leather coat
      Nor do I eat synthic food

      Again I respect your thoughts
      Please reread for the words alone as a favor to me

      Rick
  • gaerielle
    December 14, 2006
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    Seductive!

    Rick i did comment on this a while back.. an exquisite poem on affectionate displays on love and wholeness in the context of respective boundaries. You surely know how to write! Love and blessings!


    • Endeavor gold member
      January 9, 2007
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      Gaerielle

      I must have missed your comment

      Forgive me, I always try to answer all comments

      I thank you for your thoughtfull words to me

      C U my friend

      Rick

  • Tabitha-Robin
    December 5, 2006

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    Fantastic

    This is lovely and sensual. I love it so much. I was just wondering are you married now? Just curious. Keep up the wonderful writing.


    Tabitha


    • Endeavor gold member
      December 5, 2006
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      Tabith

      Fantastic is a great comment

      I am single, My divorce is final sadely and happely

      Thank you for reading

      Rick

  • Endeavor gold member
    November 6, 2006
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    My love, thank you for reading this. You alone may see this as a preview, beyound words, Rick

  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    November 5, 2006
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    first time i read this,
    i said it was beyond beautiful,
    touching and loving, warm and cozy.
    sensual, awesome excellent,
    even golden.
    this time as i read your words,
    i find it to be much more than all those things.
    it's perfect amazing just simply lovely.
    every single word is outatanding.
    thanks for sharing this with me once again.

    i love this so much, as you knew i would.

    love to you always

    joyce

  • Thankfulspirit
    November 5, 2006
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    Darn Rick....this is absolutely heaven....so sensual....so beautiful...thanks for sending me this....smiling wickedly, Terry

    • Endeavor gold member
      January 9, 2007
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      Terry

      Thank you for reading this

      Glad you liked my words

      I just noticed your comment

      Forgive me

      Rick

  • UnderTheWeepingMoon
    October 31, 2006
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    You give such sweet images...I wish my love was home from work now. Another beautiful night is in store for him because of this beautful write you have penned here. Thanks so much for sharing.
    ~Rhiannon

  • Endeavor gold member
    September 27, 2006
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    Laney, if this is true, you are feeling my words compleatly.
    I can say no more

    Rick

  • Dalaney