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Big Ole' Bear

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I am the mighty, big and strong
And what I teach, should not take long
With my paw, heal those in need
Or soul of self in which you feed

By nature I'm a lonely creature
But wise I am, my greatest feature
Through my eyes, see life's mysteries
The shaman's beast of all journeys

I bring clarity to the cycle of living
Transformation, change, I'm giving
I walk the planes of astral paths
Can look within myself and laugh

But strong I am with my defense
Not set by standard or pretense
I seek revenge when the needs arise
And my truth you see within these eyes

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Bear wisdom
Written August 31st, 2006

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 31, 2006
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    Thanks hun, appreciate it.

    Storm
  • Trackrules
    August 31, 2006
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    Great write baby! There is something about this that I really like, just not sure what it is.

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 31, 2006
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    Actually hun, the bear isn't one of my totems at all. I am a wolf for life, with a bat, tiger, owl, hawk, dragn, gryphon, butterfly and tutrle surrounding me.

    I am the Storm, every essence of it. But when it comes to my native totems, I well, most of them are air creatures. Kind of fitting.

    I am writing a series with as many animals as I can to post here.

    Thanks for the comments though hun. I guess I do possess a few of the bear qualities too.

    Storm
  • Keith Drew gold member
    August 31, 2006
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    Excellent

    Ah and I thought your spirit was that of the storm.
    But I see it is that of the bear!
    Soft and cuddly on the outside,but a spirit and heart with the strength and courage of of a mountain!
    Wonderful write Storm, i felt so safe and secure within the words of your spirit.