Satin stockings, stiletto heels and lace,
sensually caressing every contour,
tickling the senses with romantic essence.
With a gentle tease of a warm embrace,
an invitation to the boudoir,
a prism of pleasure begins to commence.
Beating hearts entwined in a race,
rhythmically burst an explosion of stars,
two lovers share erotic climax.
Author notes
notice i took care to rhyme the last words in each line with the last words in the other verses per each line: verse one, two and three with line 1. Verses 1, 2, n 3 with line 2,etc.
Written August 31st, 2006
A contest entry
- Sensual Fever by Trixie08.
300 points, ended May 9, 2007, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Delightful Fantasy Land Care To Join Me (semi quickie) by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended July 25, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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really enjoyed this. 
Great wording and metaphores.
Left my belly fluttering
Great job
Thank you for entering
Delila
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I loved this one it's as seductive as it's title and intent. It's just beautiful and it captures your senses and I could feel and see what you were achieving for the intended readers. Thank you for such a lovely write and best of luck in the contest.
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Excellent verse..very sensual..explosion of stars...
heavenly metaphor..good luck in the contest.
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No I did not notice what you said in your authors box, I was enthralled by the sensuality of this piece!
Well done and good luck in the contest!
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this is really good, i like the imagery and your use of words,
nice one,
floorboards. -
WOWWWWW!!!!!
nunya, Bravo, bravo, bravo, that calls for an encore.
This was a lovely seduction and so tastefully written. I truly enjoyed reading this piece. Your wording was very elegant and still so sensual that it created some imagery that was quite vivid. 
I love the use of the tercets and the rhyming pattern was fantastic. This was done with great style and I thank you for sharing such a lovely piece of artwork with all of us. Keep the ink flowing as this was a climactic write. You get a standing ovation from me to go along with my applause. Love and blessings for you, today and always.
Joyce
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thanks...its not easy for a former assault victim to write smut either. i think i cracked that to
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Is it just me or is it hot in here.... You made a great job of this. Its not easy to write erotica without being smutty, but youve cracked it. great job
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