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best friends in love

see these tears in my eyes
these tears are for you
i would have done anything
to take the pain away from you
but you didn't want that
you wouldn't let me
now we're both hurting
crying our eyes out
and all of this ...
because we "were" ...
best friends in love

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xx broke my heart xx
Written August 31st, 2006

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  • Selithia
    October 22, 2006
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    heartfelt

    Jess,
    I added you to my faves.....this is Megan Boyd...i really like this poem,it shows your pain..i am so sorry.....You should read some of my stuff....anyways...love ya,chique and stay strong!!!!!!!
    xoxoxoxo
    megan

  • millvillage
    September 14, 2006
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    nice on jess aint seen u in a while well lovez chick - RaT

  • candyecane2002
    September 1, 2006
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    "broke my heart"? good poem...