This Broken Heart Can Never Mend
No Matter How Hard You Try
Its Cry For Help And Forgiveness.
Beating Into Oblivion. Lost In A Powerful Trance, Seconds Ticking Away. Its Walls Building Up Again Suffocating Its Love For Him,
Making It Forget What It Feels Like To Love And To Accept Love.
The Pounding Slows
And The Heart Blackens.
Love Is Not An Issue Anymore...
Author notes
Written August 31st, 2006
A contest entry
- Contest: The Pains of Abuse by Miss Faerie.
300 points, ended September 14, 2006, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Powerful!
powerful strong words painful feelings, worthy. Keep up the good work, bye. -
This doesn't scream abuse to me... rather loss and heartbreak. However, that is done well.
Thanks for entering and good luck
Faerie x
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