feel alone,
go try to have your sins atoned.
in the storm,
let not your minds to others conform.
try to recover,
your soul rediscover,
let your mind uncover,
your heart's real lover.
hold my hand and run,
the race for your life has begun,
let your bindings be undone,
let your hands, my heart feel.
These wounds they will not heal.
Author notes
Linkin park
Written August 31st, 2006
A contest entry
- Interest me by Sam-I-Am.
400 points, ended September 5, 2006, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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I agree with Folium! ^-^ This was definitely true poetry, great emotion, clear message, nice flow, and basically you just detailed it very well with strong and smart expressions. I loved this! Great job, keep it up!
~*Princess*~
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Exeeds Expectations
This is true poetry, O friend,
The message in this, s'well sent. -
lol
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thnx a lot
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sounds like a prayer
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It does make me think really. Welld one for a poem that makes the mind stretch...
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inspired byt them actually, plus it was for a contest-so...yea!!!
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The last line reminded me of Evanescence. So is this a Linkin Park song or just something you've written that was inspired by them, because it definently seems to have their same sort of beat.
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lol
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:)
hmmm.... makes me wonder
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