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Lovely Frandita is Beuatifull








Blushing with content,
Every time
U
Are told what you are.
There
Is no other word to describe you,
Frandita.
U are my
Love.
Lovely Frandita.





Author notes

This is emotional shit about a shop assistant who served me up a mean lemon chicken.
Written August 31st, 2006

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  • aura
    March 8, 2008
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    *yawns loudly*


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    August 31, 2006
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    Hi...thnxs for commenting my poem.The one from the picasso contest...it does not rhyme...but so aint thisone and I like it anyway
    Love is something that has no rules....

    Keep up your work,
    XXJeannette


  • orionrising
    August 31, 2006
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    Love it. Makes so much sense. Brought joy reading, thank you.

  • Misery-Blood-Tears
    August 31, 2006
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    Interesting.

    I don't think I could call that poetry..but the piece is poetic in the love you have for her. I like it, for that reason.