When hearts
are open, this evening
rain traces feelings on the skin.
Love begins. A breath is stolen, time
pauses before the pulse of blood
begins again. A touch of grace
crosses space, perhaps a bird
sings. You touched me. I
heard your voice, knew,
at once, we are
friends.
We shared
our joy and
visions of love
knew we were of the same
pulse. No questions asked
in this lighted way. I taste
the rain upon my face. Spread
your wings or nest at night,
I shall always hold you
in the Light. In this
life or others we
have lived,
I know your grace upon this bridge of time.
12:20 AM
Aug. 31, 2006
Alexandria, VA
Dedicated to Lynda poet2angels
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Written August 30th, 2006
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Thank you. This was a fortunate inspiration and I was gifted with an insight on how to share it with the reader. I am glad it lifted you spirits and take your joy to heart. Love,Tom B.
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I am sorry that I haven't read your poetry sooner! You truly have a way with lifting people's spirits. Your words flow through the minds and hearts of your audience, as we could only keep those few minutes of peacefulness.
Keep it up!
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Wow. When I read a poem like yours, I have to wonder whether I'll be one of the lucky ones to find that person in life, the one who loves you just the way you are, the person that balances you out, and when I read poems like yours it gives me hope, and a voice in me tells me that that person is waiting out there somewher just for me. Thanks so much for sharing this amazing write, and thank you for commenting on my poem 'Baby'
Love
Yaqui -
Bellismo :f
This is absolutely breathtaking. It refreshes the soul and leaves one breathless with the beauty portrayed within a poet's heart, mind and soul. I love the way you spill ink and place it upon the page to perfection. I loved stumbling upon this after returning from a journey.
Thank you
Namaste sweet soul~
~Joy -
Now I am humbled. I appreciate you giving such high praise to my voice. I was only trying to let a friend know how much they had touched me. Again I can only offer you my thanks. Love, Tom B.
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Captivating
This is captivating. Your "voice" within your words is very soothing to my spirit. You write with an elegance and grace that is very unique. You have a definite gift, sir. There is no doubt you were intended to hold a pen.
May your soul always share it's beauty with the world.
Rumer -
Friendship is one of the flavors that makes life a rich meal. One of the scents that makes vulnerablity a constant temptation to be yeilded to. This gift of openess, a magic that one channels through ones bones.
Love, Tom B.
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Darling
What you lift up
and to lips sup
is pure love, light
forgiveness, wisdom and insight.
Smoosh
Janet -
Thanks for the vote of confidence. It was tricky. I kept writing philosophical statements and finally, one evening after the house had gone to bed and even the road was still, I let myself be filled with the spirit of what I wanted to say and then let the images provide containers for it, the spirit, to be held. It is always music and pictures, lyric, dance and expression. The gift is finding away to allow others to see and share the vision. Love,Tom B.
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There are those special moments when you really connect- and you just know. And it just is.
How eloquent and beautifully written!
These moments are not always easily expressed in words- but you've got it- spot on.
Lovely stuff.
~Tilly -
I have to say, i'm not really a big fan of this modern layout and shape poetry or whatever you call it, but this is a beautifully written poem and i have to admit, the way you have it laid out actually enhances the flow.
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This piece was absolutely phenominal! I loved the form in which the piece is set. This was veri passionate and full of life!
Maggie -
Superb/romantic/unique
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Excellant/Romantic/Unique
Very well done just as it is -
and let the rain trace those feelings upon skin-----like the gentle fingers of a pianist across ivory keys. Your body will follow the melody in perfect harmony with the rain. A dreamy piece-----let it rain
much love,
xoxoxoxoxo
reenie
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Exquisite
Simply beautiful. You capture the feelings of love while avoiding the overused phrases. Talented you are I always enjoy reading your work, this is certainly no exception to that rule...Deb
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this is very sweet. the format of the poetry makes you pause at particularly places that only adds to the sensation of this poem. it's like being caught in the rain with a lover. it's very nice. and kudos on the shape, that is a very difficult thing for me to do..as a lot of my poetry are just straightout vents (sometimes). well, keep up the good work. lots of love.
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Like they say,
this is beautiful.
Well I think it's beautiful too. -
very nicely
this is just a pleasure to read and i relly like the way the shape of it is presented. truly a beautiful write thank you for the post as the pleasure is mine.
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A for Awesum..;o)
Beautiful testament to loves grace Thomas...
You and Tim I suppose have a heart that is so open to receive and magnify the grace of kindness my friend...
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Hi Tom
You always seem to be reading my poetry so I decided to drop by yours...Am I ever so glad I did...This is one amazing piece of writing...I can't choose a favorite line because they all are perfect...Loved it...Loved It...
Much Love
Tes
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excellent
beautiful very good I enjoyed it very much. -
I enjoyed this very much. The imagery is strong, your way with words is beautiful you have a real gift!
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I adore the last 2 lines.
The title is very cool too. "This evening rain traces feelings on the skin" and "we were of the same pulse" are to die for.
You are a word magician. Just lovely, Tom!
Precious
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Beautiful as always!! I love the form your words took on... ahhh... refreshing read!
Mel
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This is all the prize I need. It is more than enough of a thank you for me. Love, Tom B
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Tom...
This is so beautiful!
Every line was so touching, breathtaking!
As soon as you entered my contest and I was introduced to your amazing talent, BUT ESPECIALLY your warm heart, I knew we were friends too!
TY so much. You have no idea how special this is! I am placing this on my page...TY!
Lynda
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Very Nicely written shape poem. I love the wording in your poem. It's so sweet.
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