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Lion's Lesson

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Hear my roar as I release
The pent up stress of this beast
Hear it again in different tone
To signify danger to our home

My family is my total pride
Brotherhood, side by side
Back to back, yes we'll fight
Protecting all we know as right

I pass you strength to endure
Courage, energy and so much more
The bond of 'us', it cannot break
So much I give, and little take

I find fulfillment within my heart
Our playful nature, a learned art
And when this roar rings through the land
I'll walk with you, we'll make a stand

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Lion wisdom
Written August 30th, 2006

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  • pugsforlyfe
    August 21, 2007
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    wow

    wow cool i like loines and pugs!

  • JezIsaRos
    June 27, 2007

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    Lovely, of course. Amazing rhyme and content and expression, etc. I wish I was a lion...it would be wonderful to be an animal...


    • StormGoddess Greeters member
      June 27, 2007
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      Thank you. It was a series I had started on various Native American animal wisdom. I really need to get back to doing more.

      Appreciate the comments.
      Storm

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 31, 2006
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    Thank you hun, appreciate it.

    Storm
  • Trackrules
    August 31, 2006
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    Great poem baby!

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 30, 2006
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    Thanks for the comments, much appreciated.

    Storm

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 30, 2006
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    Thank you. I am doing a series on animal totems. I have a long way to go, but will get them.

    Appreciate the comment.
    Storm

  • walkingstick98
    August 30, 2006
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    Very nicely done....enjoyed reading it..keep up the good writting

  • Doug Cundall
    August 30, 2006
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    i love poems with form. and lions.
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