Golly gee, damn
It's a traffic jam!
On your way to the wicked concert
You even bought a brand new shirt
Creeping along the highway
Inch by inch, foot by foot
Clear the traffic, you desperately pray
But minutes go by and you've stayed put
You're so, so close, yet so far away
You can hear the music start to play
You turn off the radio and roll down the window
You can even see the stadium glow
Your friends and you whisper several, a word
Of discontentment, but a stubborn thanks
The noise is loud, but lightly blurred
Moving closer, it's as if the volume cranks!
"Hey, lets dance on the car roof
We'll never make it there anyway"
You look at your friend, like she's a goof
But you all get out and start to sway
In not too long, your dancing along
To your favorite Rob Zombie song
Then concert ends, you mildly pout
At least you've beat traffic comin' out
Author notes
Haha, this was fun to write. I had wanted to go to the Rob Zombie, Godsmack, Shinedown concert. 
So I guess this is my way of going. Lol, I hope you have tons of fun, and that THIS doesn't happen to you! 
Written August 30th, 2006
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- Become Who You Are [contest # 11] by PerfectImperfection.
300 points, ended September 5, 2006, 5 entries
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Really nice, Veronica. I like the beginning. It really made me laugh. This is nicely penned. Keep up the good work, babe.
Love always,
Kristen ♥ -
This is nice, Veronica. I liked the flow of it. Very funny at the first two lines and the rhyming was really nicely done. Keep it up, babe.
Love always,
Kristen ♥ -
lol It's so funny.
I'm glad I read it. You put me in a good mood. Thanks! It's awsome (great rhymer).
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Hehe, that would be VERY interesting. He's make you a victim in one of his movies. I love the rain, being outside and havign it rain would be amazing for me! But not for you. Lol, Hopfully it won't rain!
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This was really amusing! That would be so horrible if you only get close enough to hear - I think that in that case I would leap from roof to roof until I finally jumped right into Rob Zombie's dread locks!
... That would be pretty interesting!
I am so sorry you could not get to the show! This one is gonna be wild - It's raining like mad and probably thunderstorms...we have lawn seats!!!
Thanks so much for entering!
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