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Sonogram

This is the sonogram,
of the peversities of my mind.
You'd better get yourself in line,
to sell your soul to the devil,
over wine,
if you ever want a chance,
to maybe, possibly come close,
to comprehending my intentions and my life.
Beware you don't go blind,
or you may find,
yourself most out of sorts.
Now strap yourself in tight,
because, baby, it's a roller-coaster ride,
you never can forget -
and you'll wish you never took.

I never did understand,
you see,
the attraction in,
gambling with your self,
to win a world,
when the price at stake,
could be your life.

This is the sonogram,
of the peversities of my mind,
if you ever want to understand,
just what this picture shows,
you'll have to let me lead you,
a hell of a dance.

Author notes

This is why I maybe shouldn't be awake at 1:45 in the morning, listening to Dio and letting my mind drift...
Written August 30th, 2006

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  • Leanna-bean
    March 21, 2008

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    This is a very strange poem. It sounds to me like it might be about addiction? I really like this poem! "now strap yourself in tight because baby it's a roller coaster ride" I loved that! Thanks for the entry and good luck!


  • lestat666
    December 6, 2006

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    Yes. I hope the other entries Follow your lead. This is What i've been looking for.
    Best off luck to you My friend.