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Puddles, the polar bear

Puddles the bear, stomps in puddles
That’s where he got his name
He just plops down in everyone
Loving them all the same

He kicks he splashes he frolics about
And sometimes he stands on his head
He just can’t get enough of them
If he could he’d use one as his bed

Puddles mother doesn’t really care
Being wet makes him feel like a winner
He is one happy little polar bear
As long as he’s home before dinner












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Written August 30th, 2006

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  • tawk gold member
    March 14, 2008

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    Hood-Winked!

    I love this what a wonderful children's poem. I love to write children's poems too, I am just not very good at it. Amazing imagery. I love the background too! You are so very talented and a blessing to all who know you Theresa


  • queen Moderators member
    August 30, 2006
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    Puddles sounds like quite a character


  • FifthDove
    August 30, 2006
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    Thank you for the look-see and comment. I do enjoy writing for children. Puddles will have a few more stories to tell soon.
    Thanks Cindy


  • capricornpoet
    August 30, 2006
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    puddles with a big heart

    this made me smile, puddles has a lot of water to wade in;
    a polar bear with a fitting name; wonderful and creative poem,
    children would really love this , full of imagery and imagination....a childrens story telling quill here ...