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The Haunted House!

Steven Rogers and his Friend,John Griswall went to the house by the grave.It was pitched in darkness and there was a report that a famous wrestler whose name was Eddie Guerrero was the last to be seen there.A man who could stay 1 day inside the house would get a reward of 25,000 pounds.They say over there lies the Ghost of Eddie Guerrero and another born-ghost named Grudge Wilmer.Meanwhile,The Friends of Eddie Guerrero whose name were Rey Mysterio and Chavo Guerrero were having a hardcore match,When they heard the news,they ran straight to Eddie Guerrero wife,Vicky Guerrero.
 
 Steven Rogers tried to open the door by getting past the dusty webs but there was only 1 way they could get it open.That is meeting their Enemy who had the shape for every single house key,His name was Justin Harwood.They met him and he agreed to do it for 5 pounds.So they rushed back to the Scene with the key.

 The door finally opened,There was cobwebs all around and a head of a dead cow or deer or something.They first climbed up the steps which was breaking into pieces and then they sat on the rocking chair by turn and heard the creaking sound,They each took a Cigar and started smoking on it.The puffs of smoke hit the wall of the glasses and bounced back.They kept on blowing,One hard blow and then back in position for another.The house was 247 years old and the ceiling was ripping apart.

 Many people died there and their bodies were lying on the floors but only 1 had turned into a ghost and the other was a born-ghost.Steven Rogers stepped on one body.He shrieked in fright as the body was covered with blood,There was dim light,so he took the body outside and saw that the person died recently and the person was none other than his Friend,John Griswall.To make sure that it was John,he went around the house shouting John,John again and again.

 To Be Continued.................

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hope you like it till here,this is incomplete.
Written August 30th, 2006

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  • Andy Stephenson
    October 1, 2006
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    I think you are doing really well. It is similar to other stories, but then again; most stories are similar to other stories. I would like to see the conclusion, let me know when you finish.

    You took off too quickly. What have you been doing? I see you have won a lot of trophies.


  • princessarya
    August 30, 2006
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    hey! that's not fair!!!!!!!!!!