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Trust

You p*ss me off
F*ck your lies

Don’t pull that sh*t
It’s a waste of time

I’ll never believe you
Your words mean nothing

Like broken glass
It’s only good for cutting

So go cut yourself
When you think of me

All the lies you told
You deserve to bleed

I gave you my trust
What a dumb thing to brake

That you can’t mend
It builds over time

Sorry friend
You crossed that fine line

All has been said
But nothing forgotten

To forgive this time
Is just not an option

I’ve had all I can take
No more pretend

It’s over, it’s done
This is the end.

Author notes

Reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeally annoyed atm so yer wrote this
Written August 30th, 2006

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  • Veosoco
    August 30, 2006
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    yer it did help meh vent my frustrations, feeling better now thanx


  • midnights shadow
    August 30, 2006
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    Oooh i like it, very strong! Hope your 'kay. xxx


  • A-Sad-Robyn
    August 30, 2006
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    It's a brilliant write, it flows so well! Hope it helped you vent your frustration xx