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I want, BUT...

I can feel your love for me,
But in my mind,
I always question you.

I want so bad to completely trust you,
But in my past,
I have learned I can't.

I want to love you whole heartedly,
But part of my heart belongs to someone else,
I gave it to him long ago.

I want to open my life to you,
But I am ashamed,
I fear you will run away.

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Written April 16th, 2003

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  • BeautifulContradiction
    July 15, 2003
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    Wow....this is also very powerfull. I know somewhat how you feel. Trust is a big issue for me. Keep up the great work..this is excellent. Thank you for taking the time to comment on my poetry. The poem you qritiqued, "nathan", is about my one and only love, who I am back together with now. I never got over him, and I wonder if I ever will if we break up. Write on!


  • April 16, 2003
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    OMG!!! THIS IS ME YOU WROTE THIS ABOUT ME! I bet not but this is pretty much me...FANTASTIC write...later
    ~Laura~