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Mute to the Mind



as if its my only
line,
holding on for dear
life,
for if i dont have
him,
i dont have
me,

if i dont have me,
what do i have?

silence,
but not in a good,
calm way,
its more of a
life
threatening,
eerie
cry,
almost like,
my mind is
empty.

I can utter
only
inarticulate
sounds.

i feel
mute
to
the mind.

Author notes

This kinda spilt out on a myspace message to my boyfriend..
i thought it sounded nice.
Written August 30th, 2006

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