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Old fashioned Love

Sweet memories of Ladies dresses of satin
Of Gingham Bobbysoxer's Innocence,
Of Denim and Lace rebellion,
Beautiful dark eyes, make up face
O where are they now, I cant find them
In dreams that softly faded away

I remember the misty afternoons
Her beautiful face, sweet perfume
O where are you now my beautiful girl
In memory I fear I have lost you

Corsages in sprays of orchids
Boxes of chocolates in hearts  
Picking you up from from your parents
Dressed to the nines in tuxedos
Starched collars and long flowing tails
Off to the dance in the evening

Dancin on starlight ballrooms
Trippin the light from the ball
Round and round with the music
Tasting the love of the so tall

I give you my friendship with this golden ring
For summer we'll go steady till next spring
She's the girl next door to my heartbeat
The girl that I dream in my dreams
For love has smitten our school days
And love lives forever in moonbeams

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Written August 30th, 2006

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  • jamesbliss
    March 22

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    Very good, it was very original, and I could easily relate with the themes. You really make the reader feel like he's IN the poem, you know? Excellent poem.


  • Heva Feva
    March 21
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    wow

    thats so cool!! i love the ring bit... bravo