I ask for love
total, complete, unconditional love
but not for me, through me
for one who is in need
I will do what is needed
and pay whatever price
you require
and in the light
I will live
and let the flame burn away
all it deems is
not for me
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Written August 30th, 2006
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a prayer
this sounds like what a child might pray for when they meet an unfeeling person for the first time great job
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wow glad to see something inspired you again and very selfless to ask for love for someone else...
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Thoughtful
This is so noble of a write. It is saturated with humility.
A very fine quality. Thanks for helping me to reflect inwardly. -
These arms are open, Goddess, take all you like.
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Standing Ovation...
Unconditional.... is limitless.... You are a great writer and.....
I WANT SOME OF THAT
LE
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wonderfull
this is a very beautifull write and made even more so because it was for someone else
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I understand exactly what you say and I agree. Life and love is a divine gift and so is the grace of God. How profound and how TRUE -- and how UNCONDITIONAL your love.
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I am always pleased to get a comment fom you. There is no greater love than the love freely given to another. The scourge of the world is the merchant mentality where peole expect their books to balance at the end of the day. I have no such compunction. I will give all regardless of what I get in return, because it is commanded of me. This is how I thank God for his gift of life to me.
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Instigating Love
My dearest Poet
Only someone IN the Light can pray for Light in the lives of others. It simply works that way. You are such a lovely and creative soul, with such intense love -- there is NO WAY you can NOT be of the Light! Also: the divine need to see another soul enlightened and happy, can NOT come from a soul not already embraced by Divine Love.
How merciful our God and how just! I marvel at your poem. It is an act of Love and it reminds me of Christ who was rejected in order for millions to be accepted.
Love
Myra
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The more people who read this, I believe the more love my friend will get, and maybe, just maybe with the power of love the disease will go away, Thank-you my friend this is just perfect.
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You need to read it again. You have what it takes.
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Thanks John, it is a simple concept, really. Letting the spirit love someone through you. None of your baggage or judgments in the way.
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Thanks Nadelle...If the truth be known, I love someone completely and absolutely who is not available to me as a lover, but needed me to give them my all anyways. Little did I know at the time that I would be the main beneficiary. Ha ha ha.
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really nice!!
wow!! so nice!! so touchable!! made me cry... it shows lot of passion... lot of love... keep writing like this cause it show yoy have talent!! see my work if u have some time!!
nice reading you!!
kisses!!
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speechless
really an excellent idea you have here.ive never read anything quite like this.very unique the way you see or put this piece.theres really not much of anything more i can say -
Wow you must really love someone to offer all you are just so they may find love. It's absolutly beautiful in all it's emotions and feelings and turns of the dice. You don't expect something this beautiful in a world of selfish me's and i's that run rampant looking for something only to make them happy...wow. just like...wow. i'm going to go cry now.
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Yes, I have a soppy side, too. Or rather, I have a comic side, too. This is my real side. Thank you for the comment. This is a prayer for a friend. She said she needed to know how to pray. I am not religious, in the common sense of the word, so I just gave my best shot.
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This is one of the best I've read today. It made me sit back and touch the screen with my fingers...
Love,
Lane -
Thank you for your grace. I am honored.
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wonderful
just beautiful
so touching
and in the light
I will live
and let the flame burn away
all it deems is
not for me
Great write
keep up the great writting
Firequeen -
Thank-you......tears........xxxx
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nice..
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