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Lost

Though I don't care
Though I don't want to care
It still hurts
There's nothing left here
A barren wasteland
I picture it as my soul

I don't want to care....

-But it hurts....-

A moon shines on me
The same as the sun
Not your face I'm looking for
Not mine either
I feel so confused

Nothing should matter....

But it does....-

What should I do?
No help is ever offered
Even when I cry to the winds
Even when I wail to the rain
No answer creeps back to me

I even pray....

-But no one answers....-

So I'm lost
Forever wandering within my soul
Searching
I've been searching for so long
I've forgotten what I'm looking for

You....?

-Me....?-

Author notes

My favorite. Wrote it sometime last year.
Written August 29th, 2006

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  • Poetic Ballerina
    August 31, 2006
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    Well I'm so very glad you enjoyed it! I tried to use the strike command thingy too...but it doesn't like me so it didn't work....Anyway, thank you so very much for the comment!


  • ---Laura---
    August 29, 2006
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    brill

    I always find that my better poems are older!
    and this was fantastic! i loved it and i can also relate to it im trying to find myself but i forget and think im looking for someone else its a very upsetting confustion i'll agree with you on that one!

    I loved the way you have lines in blod they bring out the meaning more! this was a very powerfull oem and full of 'Lost' emotion. That is what made me love it extra!

    Great write truely was

    Anyways

    laura

    xxx