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If You Would Die

If you would die
There'd be a battle at hand
An epic war on your account
Even if I'm the only combatant

If you would die
There'd be a battle at hand
No sanctuary could keep the enemy safe
Such would be my fury
Blood would stain their marble walls
None would be safe

If you would die
There'd be no land left
There'd be no life worth living
None would live past you
You are eternal

If you would die?
There is no if
You wouldn't die
I wouldn't let you
You are eternal

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Written August 29th, 2006

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