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Orange

Red wanted to be bold,
Yellow wanted to be bright.
But yellow loved red,
Red thought yellow was out of sight,
The two fell in love,
Only to find,
That Orange wasn't too far behind.

Orange wasn't bold,
Orange wasn't bright,
But orange was orange,
And that was all right!












(So Cheesy!!!)

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Written August 29th, 2006

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  • grannyeri gold member
    August 30, 2006
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    So simple - so easy to read and understand, so easy to see why you received gold in this contest for this poem. Congratulations,


  • Samplette gold member
    August 30, 2006
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    too cute...thank you very much for entering.
    Sam


  • Frogzter gold member
    August 29, 2006
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    Oh, I think this is just too cute. A nice little rhyme about the color orange! Best of luck to you and many....
    blessings,
    Frog


  • Ai Shataru
    August 29, 2006
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    lol, this poem made me laugh. In a good way of course, lol. Anyways, nice write, good luck in the contest