the smell of it makes me lick my lips
my stomach growls to munch it down
"hershey's" is written carefully on each square
who knew that a color could taste so good
luscious brown melts in my mouth and makes me crave more
Author notes
Written August 29th, 2006
A contest entry
- For Chocolate Lovers Only-Enter Here!! by AliceinPoetryLand.
300 points, ended September 1, 2006, 16 entries
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Comments
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Excellent write. I loved the imagery you used and i love that second last line...'who knew that a color could taste so good'.
I think we all wonder that at times
Thanks for entering and good luck in my contest.
Gaylene
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