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Out behind the sheds


Out behind the sheds
Where no one can see
I’ll make a concoction
For you and me

Sip after sip
We’ll dance the night away
Spinning and twirling
Trying to forget yesterday

The potion, the poison
It hurts, but it helps
No one must hear us
Hide your whines and yelps

The potion erased,
Your pain and your sorrow,
So you can do as I do,
To survive tomorrow

Author notes

Okay, I haven't written in a long time, major writter block >.<
And a HUGEEE Thanks to Eden for helping me soooo much on this one!
Written August 29th, 2006

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