Who do you turn to when everything is helpless
you sit staring into an empty space
hoping that someone hears your silent cries
you reach out for a hand
but your dazed eyes catch a glimpse of your hurt, love, regrets, lies, your scars, a story far more worse than the pain of making them.
That pain is a scar deep inside
it can never heal nor be forgotten.
its just there to penetrate your heart
and to remind you
that everything is your fault...
Author notes
Written August 29th, 2006
A contest entry
- Guilt - Confession - Forgiveness (contest 1500 points total!) by Resurrected-heart.
800 points, ended September 1, 2006, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is a good piece and you have described the feelings very well. Wish you all the best in the contest. James
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i like this poem very much its beautifully phrased thankyou ressurected heart
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i loved this write. i felt it ALL the way, thanks for sharing!!!
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Good write, thanks for the entry.
God bless you
RH
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