I can remember being all alone
I felt I had no home
Yet Jesus touched me
His love gave me the key.
My life opened up
No longer a pup
I stood tall
With Him I have it all!
Author notes
Written August 29th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Precious Moments by delicate angel.
450 points, ended September 6, 2006, 13 entries
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I liked this poem a lot, great use of rhyme here
Keep writing, this was a great spiritual poem which I enjoyed a lot. Good luck in the contest, this was a very hopeful poem 
All the best
Pozo
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Short and sweet...thats the best way to describe this poem. The few lines are ever so touching! Jesus love is always there at all times, and its such a blessing once we realize that it really is true. I am ever so happy to find that you too know God's love! Keep on writing! Your poetry is such a beautiful inspiration to especially those who are doubting in faith. Many blessings!!!
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