She came upon wings of death
A child of the night she was
But I was blinded by her sweet seduction
She whispered things in my ear
Twisted fantasies of merciless deception
And I was swept away by her soft speech
I gave her all I had
Yet she wanted something more
And I gave it willingly, for I was spellbound
She sank into me
Euphoric agony
And I succumbed to blissful darkness
I gave her my heart
And she murdered my soul
Feeding off the light in me
Now I'm dead
Lifeless, soulless, empty because
I gave her everything, for I was spellbound
(About a vampire)
Author notes
They Used Dark Forces
Written August 23rd, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Whatever Your Heart Desires by xxhoopstar21xx.
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Very good! I loved it! It was so dark and very vivid and bloody! Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!!!
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u hit sexy dark and scary. great job!! awesome read. thanx for entering and good luck!
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this was an interesting read. some parts didn't really relate to the prompt though.
i really liked the last stanza.
so goodluck and thanks for the entry
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Yikes! I'll be sleeping with garlic around neck tonight after reading that one. Well done!
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Lol. Thanks for the comment.
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A person's will can be very strong. But once it is givin or taken away. They are left with nothing. Great job. Good luck.
~Oka
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omg i love this its great it makes alot of sence well nice write
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