On a far off moutain's ledge
Falls my pride from where it came
Below lies the valley to catch it
But I am too high now
Never again to see it come alive
Goodbye old Spirit of Pride
Goodbye
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Written August 28th, 2006
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But I am too high now
Never again to see it come alive
I am going to say that to lots of things and we MUST say this to a lot of sin and "bad spirit" in our lives. This is short and to the point. -
Thanks very much paula. I am late replying to your kind comment because my pc was dead, lol. GBY!
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Thank you Jennifer for the kind comment! I'm sorry to reply so late but my pc was killed by lightning and had to get a new one. GBY!
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this is a good poem. it is short, but I have also
written short ones and that does not mean that it
is not good. I love that opening line:
On a far off moutain's ledge
Falls my pride from where it came
I can actually picture this far off mountain ledge.
which sets the image of the rest. of losing your
pride. good write. -
Thanks for the opportunity to read your distinctive and individual poem. I appreciate the effort that you took. One of the great things about AllPoetry is the chance I get to read so many interesting and unique poems, like this one. I’m glad that I stumbled upon it.
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Oh thank you very much! actually...me too. wish I had no pride standing in my way,lol. GBY And thanks for the applause too!
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Wish I was too high.
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