If I could fly
I'd have to say goodbye
to those i love
including you
Though I cannot fly
I must still good bye
Just remmember
The Three Precious words
that i said to you
i meant it
I'm true blue
and truly blue
Smiling eyes
just stare back at me
as i say that to you
the audience
in the back-round
just blabs away
as i vow my love to you
years of regret
were my ones without you
I've spent many years without you
and many more nights than that
with my arms
crossed around my knees
Wishing for the three precious words
I lost my way
in life you see
i can't see where i am
but people say I'm not lost
I've just lost it
if i knew what i had lost
that would be easy
i know I've lost happiness
but what else
Thank you
For being you
Letting me love you
You know i love you
And I know you love me
The three precious words
I love them
less than you
but you make them look good
as coming from your lips
"I love you"
is all i hear
it almost moves me to tears
the three precious words
Be of good spirit
Where ever you go
I know you are
but its words to live by
You
Have done what i thought
no one could accomplish
dinners i spent with you
i had dinner
but that wasn't my favorite dish
it was you
with a side dish
of the three precious words
for dessert
a night spent,
in your arms
Secrets told
To you
From me
the ones silent
And untold
We have shared much with each other
which is why this hurts so much
Let's cruise the seas
i used to say but
now that its over
i cannot say that
unless you say
the three precious words
Climbing a tree
you'd say to me
"Get down
I love you
I don't want you hurt"
I did that for my benefit
To hear your voice
Calling to me
Memories
Of you
I hope will stay
As I also wish to remmember
The only one
To ever tell me
The three precious words
Even though you can't
We must say goodbye soon
Dreams
Of you I've had
Were all during the day
But they were all good
And of you
I never would've guessed
It would end this way
Visions of you
In my mind
Memories
Will repeat in my mind
Three precious words
The time you said them
What could've happened...
What would've happened...
All play in my mind
As you and me
Those are the scenarios
Of me and you
In my mind
Don't smile
Too much without me
I know you love me
Love never fades
I did not much wrong
But care too much
If tomorrow never comes
I won't be surprised
I knew this day would arrive
But so soon
I didn't know
I just wish
I could see you again
To hear again
The three precious words
But since tomorrow never comes
Today's' time does not move
Blue eyes
I used to have
The Brown eyes
You used to have
During our short relationship
We found out so much
We loved much more
Who else can say
that they felt so much for a person
and the person felt for them
that they changed eye color
Loneliness
Is too loyal to me
When it comes to love
Alas its a rash
It never goes away!
Leave me alone
Loneliness
Change me for the better for once!
Or leave me
You can never please me
You don't know the meaning
Of "Three Precious Words"
Hold my hand
Until we must say goodbye
Though we're only holding hand
In spirit
Eventually we must let go
Forever isn't forever anymore
We'll be together for ever
That was so fun
I wish it could never end
But all good things
Must come to an end
They end faster
Than the bad things
As the three precious words
I heard it so much
They all intertwine into one
But of all history
Its my favorite day
That one
Memory
I praise the day
That I met you
My better half
Your everything I'm not
I love you for that
The Three Precious Words
I Love You
My blond haired Blue Eyed Angel
Author notes
Written August 28th, 2006
by Daniel Carrasquillo
pen and nick name CrazyDan
In a list
A contest entry
- Make me Smile... by poetreeluvr.
450 points, ended March 5, 2007, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Comments
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Wow this is a really good poem
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I loved this Dan, such a beautiful piece, I love this, and the repetition of 3 precious words, amazing none the less, you are truely an amazing poet, you could write circles around me, another beautiful tear jerker, you will never cease to make me cry with writes like this,
keep writing
~Ashley~<3 -
I really do love this poem. It is long as you said, but very truly beautiful. I feel this way about my ex-husband and as it could be meant for someone alive or has left us, it has alot of meaning behind every word. Very well done, and thank you for entering it and allowing me to read such a felt heartfelt piece. Keep up the writing and thank you again for the entry
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It is long but if that's what your mind was telling you, then it would be remiss of you not towrite it all down. It has sweet images within and I wish I believed that just saying 'I love you' would take all the hurt and pain away but sometimes when you say those words it only intensifies the pain.
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It is indeed way too beautiful. The length is a killer indeed but who cares. Oh well, I don't. It rains upon my soul like summer rain. What a marvelous piece of work you have here. Keep up the most outstanding job as always and God bless you
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i actually made it for a contest, where actually, i used all 3 options in one, i don't think it got me any extra points. Anyways, it was all about love and the three options were 1. take these first lines and make a poem off them, 2. Use a meaningful phrase in a poem more than 3x 3. make a poem that is more than 10 stanzas long.
I did that goodly -
wow this is really amazing. i love it.. the title is just perfect.. and it re-accures throughout the poem.. it's just perfect.. and not many people use those "Three Precious Words" on a way that they cherish the meaning. and in your poem you show the depth and true meaning of them. all in all.. this lengthy poem was great!
-- Brooke -
Thank you for entering.
Sam
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i think this is far too long...I liked what i read and then i have no patience to see the poem proceed. Maybe my problem, may be the write doesn't capture one's attention for such a long span...i dunno...
anyways - good luck,
rachel -
wow....
wow.. I don't even know what to say to this... this is really good. This is a really sweet poem. I can feel the emotions flowing. All the words went together so well. This was a beautiful write. Thanks for the comment on my poem. Keep up the writing!
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wow you really turn these words into a picture...such a confused sad image into my head...you really do no how to make your words become so real even though i don't no you i can understand and feel the pain you feel....but trust me it wil get better as Goodolenad said, you wil soar and the day you do....you will feel so amazing it will be so hard to imagine ho wyou felt before it...GOOD LUCK really enjoyed reading it!
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that was such a beautiful write... i wish you much luck for the contest
NSH
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that's very sweet of you to say.
don't give up, you'll get shot down a few more times, but in the end, you'll fly up so high, you'll soar! no kidding. it's bound to happen. it only makes sense, no?
i don't think there's any pity either, oonly caring. what other word can use to describe when someone's heart bleeds for another? you can't say he's pitying his friend. that sounds....almost cruel. -
thank you, and actually if there were more lovers like me, there would be more heartbreak, they just wouldn't feel it in the form of ending a dating relationship, they'd feel it in other ways. I'm immune to relationship pain, then again, after my first 100x getting shot down, it didn't even matter to me.
But i'm glad you can imagine that, it made me smile.
Pity, i believe there is no such thing, only caring. But yes you are caring.
As always, i'm glad you liked it, its one of few things that bring me joy. -
MAGNIFICENT! (no joke)
Climbing a tree
you'd say to me
"Get down
I love you
I don't want you hurt"
I did that for my benefit
To hear your voice
Calling to me
I can picture that scene. Well, I can't really picture YOU, but I can see the scene play out in my head. It's so sweet when you say in the end that you only do it to hear her voice.
Oh man. Well, if all lovers were like you, I suppose there'd be no heartbreak in the world. Those three words. *sigh* There's so much love in this. Oh...oh...it makes my heart sigh. I'm pitiful, aren't I? Yes, I'll happily admit it.
Anyways darling, it's really a very wonderful write. I think it'd one of my favorites. Really, it's got loads to it. -
Very Well Written!
This is really amazing work! I truly enjoyed reading this. Wonderfully worded!! Those three words mean a lot to so many of us!! Thank you for sharing~~ best of luck in the contest you are entered in
Shannon
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