There is no one I have met
Who is quite like you
There is no one that I know
Who does the things you do
The way you sing ‘You’re Beautiful’
‘James Blunt is cool’ you claim
But I think its time you know the truth
That he is really lame
The way you twist then wet your hair
It isn’t worth your trouble
Because you’ll wrap it anyways
And still look like a model
The way you have a go at me
Before you hug me tight
The way we end up having fun
Straight after a fight
Yes sister dear it must be said
I Love You and it’s true
And I know, though it’s not said
That you really love me too
Author notes
This is for my big sister. You know I love you so much, and when I go I will miss you too.
HAVE A GREAT BIRTHDAY
Written August 28th, 2006
A contest entry
- Sibling Love by Abidoodle333.
700 points, ended April 28, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Show My Sister Some AP Love by Misty Melody.
400 points, ended April 24, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sisters by Corinthians13-4.
338 points, ended July 20, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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This was really really really great, and totally had the message I wanted. Excellent work and the best of luck in the contest!
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Ha ha. The second stanza was so funny. I hate that song...
This definently describes sibling love well. Congrats on both your well-earned trophies.
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This is a very sweet poem and a nice tribute to your sister. It shows what sisters mean to one another. Thanks for entering my contest and good luck. Melody
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I love this. It's touching and wonderfully written
Thanx for enetring and good luck
Abidoodle -
Heartfelt!!!!
I love this it is hearfelt and humorous at the same time. The little things that make sisters,well sisters are conveyed in this piece!!Thanks for entering the contest and good luck to you!!!! -
I never had a knack for greeting card poetry, unfortunate really, it's probably one of the most popular forms of the art and one of the few that's paid. Done well, it just makes someone feel warm and fuzzy all over. I suspect your sister enjoyed the poem as I did.
Rainbows,
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Very good poem sis... how have u been haven't talked to u in a while..
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aww this is so sweet I loved it I can really relate to this too lol actually I think the only time my sister told me she loved me was a few weeks ago when she was drunk but then again I haven't said it to her much either this is a very lovely piece you inspire me to write something to my sister too anyways great job it flowed so well
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have some applauses
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dang i wish i was your sister.LOL. It was a great poem!!!!
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lol that is sooo nice and funny at the same time
it really is awsome
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Happy birthday to your sister! This was a great poem! I bet she loved it!!! I wrote one for my sister also that was not near thisi good... nor this full of emotion! This was just pleasently amazing!! It was very calming! Great job! Thanks for sharing!
~Princess Padge
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Wow...wish i thought this up for my sister ♥ fantastic job
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This is a beautiful write, a real tribute to your sister. Well done xx
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Thanks. The punctuation is sloppy, well actually its not, there is none. lmao. Thanks for the comment
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that's beautiful!!! punctuation needs work other than that I wouldn't change a thing
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