If dreams should become reality
I will walk within your heart
Never again, to be apart
No clouds of gloom adorn the skies
Rainbows of hope is what I see
The sun shines bright for you and me
Never again, to be apart
Take my hand and guide me home
Where in the heavens, love can roam
The sun shines bright for you and me
A beautiful day it is to live
Blessed by the gift you give
Where in the heavens, love can roam
No clouds of gloom adorn the skies
If dreams should become reality
In your arms is where I'll die
Blessed by the gift you give
This heart in softest beat
Buried pains to surely defeat
In your arms is where I'll die
With these dreams, meant to be
Soaring in the clouds, wild and free
Buried pains to surely defeat
Cradle this heart forever
To conquer the hurt together
Soaring in the clouds, wild and free
A moment, in my clutch to seize
Never wishing, this place to leave
To conquer the hurt together,
In your arms is where I'll die
Blessed by the gift you give
For true love cannot deny
Author notes
Double ripple
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Written August 28th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Love & romance by Darc Soul.
300 points, ended October 9, 2006, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Thanks Vickie. Now for the ripple...go for it. You'll probably make mine look like crap, lol.
Storm -
Another beautiful poem, filled with longing and love. I am so glad to see you writing these instead of those dark ones that are personal.
And there you go again with that ripple stuff. Seeing as I have been trying forms, I am going to have to give this a try.
My love to you
Vickie -
Thanks hun, glad you liked.
Storm -
great write sweetheart. It show lots of hope and love and I really like hearing you like that. It brings a smile to my face. And your too I hope
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Thank you Adrian. That hope, that's what keeps me sane, to hold on to reality. Appreciate your comments hun.
Storm -
A promise of love undying, sort of sad yet hopeful. Beautifully written.
A compelling read to me
Adrian
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Thank you Curt, I really appreciate your words.
Storm -
Yes, someday you will find that person. As will I. But till then, just know, you are never truly alone, for there are people that care. If you ever need to just vent it out, feel free to drop me a line. I an wonderful at listening to everyone else's heartache.
Thank you for your comments.
Storm -
A wonderful poem Storm, full of love, and hope, the emotion in this write is overflowing, as are the images that you always use so well. The stanza “The sun shines bright for you and me a beautiful day it is to live blessed by the gift you give” really struck me as the heart and soul of this piece, it sums up all of the emotion and love that you portray so well. Great write Storm, way to go.
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This is really nice. I wish I had someone like this to hold on to when I was feeling lonely or sad. I wish I had someone to help through things, and tell me that everything is going to be okay. It hurts to know that my parents are not even the people I can talk to. But one day I will find someone who I am happy with forever. Someone just like the person inside of your poem.
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Thats my Goddess of the Storm!
Strong in will, even if her heart does get struck by her own lightening sometimes.She will always be the Goddess of the skies to me. -
Thank you Keith, but no way. As my motto says, the fury of the Storm will always be. That fury does not always signify the bad things = )
storm -
Beauitful
Walk away before it is too late.
Wonderful Storm your heart in words.
Are you going to change your name from Storm to the promise of a rainbow?
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