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Sorry (Pt2)

Sorry for being who i am
Sorry for saying the things i said
All i can do is say sorry to you
And kiss your lips and tell you i love you

More than life itself
which is why
I have to say goodbye

Sorry im not all you want
Sorry for not being all you need
I wish i could be all you need
But don't think it could ever just be
Just you and me

Gonna Go Now
And Save your life
Gonna go away now
But just gonna leave it at sorry

Author notes

this is the 2nd part of my poem sorry, wrote this part on sat nyte, when i wasfeeling depressed n stuff, wrote it @ lyke 3am lol
Written August 28th, 2006

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  • Veosoco
    November 17, 2006
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  • A-Sad-Robyn
    August 30, 2006
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    Wow another great write I feel this way a lot too... x


  • DarknessFleeting
    August 29, 2006
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    I can really relate to this, because one of my es's used to say he loved me more than life itself, he was my first love and it ended horribly. It made me think of things in his perspective for a second. Thank you for sharing this.


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    August 29, 2006
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    Seems to be alot going on.. I think the basics are pretty good but I think it needs a little tweeking to solidify it. At least you were able to get your feelings out..Thanks for sharing.
    Soulful Woman