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Lost In Your Eyes

Lost Deep in Thought
With only one on the brain
The Kiss the hug
The fun in your arms

How to get past such things
When all one wants
Is to be with you
The true angel

Devoid of all impuritys
Lost in My thoughts
With only you on the mind
The brain is lost

In this addiction
That i never want
To let Go
can you see

The way of my love
Can you feel how
I love
Can you see my heart

It is laid out
Infront of you
It is meant
Only for you

Can you hold it
It wont break
I trust you with this
For i know no harm

Can come to it
With it in
Your Hands

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Written August 28th, 2006

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  • Poetryintheblood
    February 29, 2008
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    Thank you for your wonderful entry, good luck, Josie