When God lays down this body to rest.
And I know down here I have done my best.
When God opens Heavens door.
I will take my Soul with me inside.
And there I will rest forever more.
Author notes
What a wonderful day that will be.
Written August 28th, 2006
My 31st Poem Option
A contest entry
- 5 Lines or Less...ends in 1 hour!! Give me Your Best!! by Timeless Wisdom.
525 points, ended November 15, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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This is beautiful, thanks for the meaningful message in this beautiful entry- thanks for entering and good luck to you.
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Great job..you are a finalist!
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Beautifully penned and it shows the significance of the christian faith. Bravo!
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A very well written poem, such peace in your words and you brought death another meaning, well done
Best of luck!
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Peacful. I like x
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I read a prayer from down inside...
Isn't this what we all long for...rest...
XXJeannette
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wonderful piece, short and sweet
best of luck
Tasha
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Beautiful
This is a beautiful piece of writing. Well done and good luck int he contest.
Countrybabe
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Excellent piece, thats all i've got to say.
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A superb piece, Ed This spiritual poem brings feelings of hope and well being, a moving, tender write.
Good luck in the contest
Dee
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A superb piece, Ed Moving and thoughtful. The gentleness of this piece is very touching, a strong acceptance of life and death.
Good luck in the contest
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most very excellent write!!!!!
when Heavens' gates do open wide...i'll be in line to get inside!
this is beautiful, very poignant,so true and to the point. God bless you. keep the ink flowing!
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omg, this is awesome. I don't see this as sad, other than
for us who are left behind. but this was beautiful, wonderful
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moved...
Soul ..yes very very intresting and deep and I think I shall want the same that my soul comes with me when UI die..its very moving and written with much emotions..like the poem! Thanks for entering n good luck..
~~~PREETI~~~
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Very touching piece Uncle Ed. Beautifully done!
~Lori~
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