Who am I?
I'm a sucker for your life,
you ain't gonna survive,
you're gonna die.
You'll get the pain,
you'll get the fever,
you're gonna die,
Don't you know I cut like a cleaver.
I live on what you feed,
you're the one that helps me breed,
I've taken too much for granted,
now see the treason being implanted.
(Wicked laughter) hahahahahahahah..You're gonna die
(CHORUS Part 1)
Who am I?
I'm a devil,
Who am I?
I'm your death.
Who am I?
(Wicked laughter) hahahahahahahaha..You're gonna die
(CHORUS Part 2)
Doctors pay my dues,
you owe my brothers death
Doctors pay my dues,
now its your death, (that) I choose.
Who am I?
(Wicked laughter) hahahahahahhahahh..You're gonna die.
Lucifer has sent me,
to get you in hell,
your father's shakin,
your mother's cryin,
prayin for you to survive,
What a lie, but you're gonna die.
(Bridge)
You'll get the pain,
You'll get the fever,
Don't you know I cut like a cleaver.
(CHORUS Part 1)
Who am I?
I'm a devil
Who am I?
I'm your death.
Who am I?
(Wicked laughter) hahahahahahaha..You're gonna die
(CHORUS Part 2)
Doctors pay my dues
you owe my brothers death
Doctors pay my dues
Now its your death, (that) I choose
Who am I?
(Wicked laughter) hahahahahahahaha..I'm your infection.
Author notes
Code Monkey!
Prompt: You are in an emergency ward!
Well Well I've had been on a ride to hell and back (gladly!). I was so sick a month(n a haf) back that I was admitted to ICU/CCU. My condition was nearly fatal, but (thank God!) I survived.
Lastly this is 100% Metal Lyrics.
Written August 27th, 2006
Comments
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Hey my name is Nelena, I am your contest co-host.
Wow this is very harsh! Not what I'd expect with this prompt, but very cool anyway. I would love to hear the tune to this someday
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wow this is very good. i love it!!!! havent heard from you in a while. =[ well talk to you late
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WOW! This was very awesome!!! I LOVED THIS ONE!!! I TRULY DID!!! Sure it was dark, but it still was a fantastic write! Great job! I mean, I don't know what else to say! The many different ways you rhymed were just breath-taking and amazing! So well thought out!!! This grabs my attention all too well! GREAT JOB!!! TRULY GREAT JOB!!!!!
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Yeah, yeah, I know, I missed a lot. This song kicks some MAJOR rear though!!! Sorry I took so long to get to it. Really sorry, 'cause it rocks!!!
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I like it a lot. It is very good.
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YUMMY!!! Your talent for writing songs is sooo sexy. I got a Marilyn Manson or ofcourse Gerard Way vibe. I love every word. Your always awesome. You ROCK babe!
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cool...awesome lyrics
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wierd ... different ... raging and angry. i like that it is the perspective of the germ - greedy and seething.
"Who am I?
I'm a sucker for your life,
you ain't gonna survive,
you're gonna die.
You'll get the pain,
you'll get the fever,
you're gonna die,
Don't you know I cut like a cleaver."
great lyrics ... -
Sooo much anger, this a fiery poem i love to dive in and swim, wonderful piece, i really love the feeling of this anger, the greed of a life -
Who am I?
I'm a sucker for your life,
you ain't gonna survive,
you're gonna die.
You'll get the pain,
you'll get the fever,
you're gonna die,
Don't you know I cut like a cleaver.
this part is BRUTAL which means it's really a killer poem! -
5 Stars *****
Yo Dude
, (bhai mere 
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Its not my cuz's lyrics, its his friend's lyrics...I was facing a head-ache like situation, so no way could I have had been able to do it without your help, thanks very much....they've asked me to make it more emotional, but now i face a headache no more..
Excellent lyrical form man, I can "N E V E R" make anything as rockin' as this one... .. thanks again.. and again.. and again ... and again!!! and again.
I did read this here before and I dont know how come it doesn't show my comment
(blame AP..
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I really commented
!! (So i think 
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take cares and have a nice time my dear friend.. just keep it up.. your humble little friend..
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... .. - vic ( who else? )
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you have a voice? i wanna hear you sing it, i all ways wish i knew how it would sound ..and reading it is never the same ...good write.
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Great write Maynak (did i spell that right?) keep 'em comin'!
The Dragon Freak,
Justin -
I guess I can.
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such a wonderful write i wish a nice deadly germ would attack everyone on my hit list just so they could suffer a great deal not much to ask for keep doing well
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Excellant /Chilling
A wierd, kinda wild, wonderful write about a sensitive subject.
glad you pulled through. I like this one just as it is. -
I like the part where you said "hahahahahahaha you're gonna die" It made me laugh my head off.
And thank goodness you were treated, AP wouldn't be the same without you! 
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my cowboy !! this sounds pure Metalllica !!! gr8 gr8!! i like i like
speciallly the 2nd part !!!gr8 job
the story is lil bit sad, (author's comment
) but hey im glad as well and a gr8 job came out of it!see? theres always a bright side in everythin
cowgirl
me
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hmmm ... not bad.. i kinda had a hard time feeling the song, but u've done a good job..
keep it up mayank
much love
pervy
~rana~
Edited on Aug 28, 3:07 because ''. -
WHOA MAN YOU'RE KINDA CRAZY. GOOD JOB THOUGH
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This is so metal. And I love that. But I don't see how it was inspired by the quote. I like it, but it doesn't fit the contest.
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wow... lol crazy uncle...
lol gREAT job this is really awesome, different but awesome
diggin it majorly
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