Nine hundred Twenty three and a half
That's how many we killed
Sit in my room join me in a maniacal laugh
Nine hundred twenty three dead, -
But my dear, what of the half?!?
Author notes
*giggles* what of the half??? hmmmm????
Written August 27th, 2006
A contest entry
- Within five... x by Lavender Butterfly.
300 points, ended August 27, 2006, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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funny, i wonder if there's a story behind this???
that'd be interesting..
nice poem, anyway
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Yes, there is a story... Its long and convoluted, but in short, a friend of mine and I were thinking about how we could break the record for people killed (obviously wars, bombings and the like are not included). We decided it would be very entertaining to leave one amoungst the many who was half dead. We even picked the half-dead victim. Hehehe... Anyways, we were drunk and giggly and that is what came about... Thank you so much for the applause!
<3
Muriel
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So very creative and truly a clever piece. Thanks for sharing and good luck in my contest... x Butterfly.
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