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Dreams You Keep

Close your eyes, breathe in deep.  Think of all these dreams you keep.  Smile for but a moment of time.  To open those eyes, and soon to find.  The dreams you see, soon to be.  This hope of your reality.  The clouds replaced by solid form.  For soon, appears a calming storm.  The lightning flash within the eyes, tell secrets of what the heart can't hide.  And thunder clasps do not retreat, symbols of the that same heart's beat.  Gentle rains to wash away, the pain and hurt you feel each day.  As the tempest comes to pass, brings rainbows bright with hopes to last.  For at the end, find your pot of gold.  Within those arms, in tightest hold.  In age of beauty, friends be true.  In dreams you keep, I sneak into.

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Written August 27th, 2006

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 28, 2006
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    In dreams I go, from what you keep
    Emerging now, from the deep
    Depths of what's inside your mind
    Just close your eyes, it's me you'll find!


    Thanks hun
    Storm
  • Trackrules
    August 28, 2006
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    Wow Sweetie such a great write. And by the way you can sneak into my dreams anytime!

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 27, 2006
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    Thanks hun, much appreciated it. Your comments are always welcome.

    Storm

  • WarrioroftheHeart
    August 27, 2006
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    Wow Storm, what regret me said
    and then some

    Thank you for this post Storm, it seems so apt to me right now

    Adrian

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 27, 2006
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    Thanks hun, really appreciate your comments. Glad you enjoy.

    Storm
  • regret me
    August 27, 2006
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    amazing!your writes are soo
    passionate and pure,makes the
    reader feel you are speaking
    directly to him,really a rare
    talent ive tried but to no avail
    awesome poem!

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 27, 2006
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    Thank you Brian, truly appreciate your comments.

    Storm

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 27, 2006
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    Thank you Sandy. LOL, I guess if I can't have romance, I can write dreams of a romantic imagination huh. Appreciate the comments.

    Storm

  • Haunted-Memory silver member
    August 27, 2006
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    Excellent

    A poem of dreams of love and hope this was awesome a fantastic write wishing you all my best wishes Brian.

  • Heavenly Angel
    August 27, 2006
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    Oooh Storm, this is just breath taking and beautiful! So serene and calm and just gorgeous! One of your best, to be sure!
    Thanks for sharing!
    Love ya,
    Sandy
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