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Turbulence

Compared to the turbulence in my heart.
And the restless flood of thoughts.
Even the sea seems composed and calm.

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Written August 27th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    August 27, 2006
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    A great write, sincere and well expressed. Thanks for this entry and good luck in my contest... x Butterfly.


  • bubbasamuel
    August 27, 2006
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    thank you sweet one. your comments are a great source of encouragement to me.


  • MaaiL
    August 27, 2006
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    EXCELLENT!

    gr8 write my frnd!