Why fall into the abyss of regret
When you can fly forever for love
A broken heart is a bleeding heart
But only as long as your haunted by memories
Stare at the Dusk and realize
That days come and days go
Everyday brings changes
But your guardian angel will always
Be there to protect you
From the fantasy created
To lure you away
From the concrete of reality
Every person has their beauty
They might not believe it
But it is as delicate
And as a beautyful as a crystal rose
You should like the way a person is, not push them into your "Perfect" view
Author notes
Option 1
Written August 26th, 2006
A contest entry
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simply beautiful, simply lovely, love the last line (^.^) good luck in the contest!
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I love the ending line.
It gives the poem such a strong finnish, and really leaves an impact on the reader.
The lines :
Every person has their beauty
They might not believe it
Are brilliant.
Everyone is beautiful in their own special way =]
Thank you for entering and good luck!! -
I liked this. It speaks the truth. I really liked this a lot and wish you luck on the contest.
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great!
i like this one alot, its really pretty for lack of better words
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this is great! thank you for entering and good luck!
*ConvenientExcuses*
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