U are special
Nice, caring and always sharing
Cool and a great uncle.
Like God and special like God and Jesus
Enjoying heaven.
Because you love us all
Right amount of love for everyone.
I am very sad that you passed away
An Angel in heaven a V.I.P
Never bad or mad.
Author notes
This is for my Uncle Brian who was my nan's son
my Nan is angelica here on Allpoetry.
I am 9 years old
Written August 26th, 2006
A contest entry
- A Pay It Forward Contest.... actually by LittleAnn.
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I donn;t see abcakround here. Let me know if you fix it, but thanks for entering the contest anyway; I'm sure the poem was well written.
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Thank you for sharing your poem with us, Justin.
It is a very well written acrostic, and shows how special your Uncle is to you.
I am sorry that your Uncle Brian died, and I hope you are less sad with time. My God grant you and your family comfort and peace.
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I think it's very sweet for you to write the poem and that, with time, your talents shall improve.
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Dear Poet of 9 years,
Please read the instructions. This is a FORMS CONTEST for only certain allowable forms and you need to post
the option #. Once you do this let me know and I'll read your entry.
Thank you for stopping and hope to read you r e a l
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hmmm...
my uncle brian died a few years ago...sometime around chrismas...it was very sad...we all loved him...im sorry for your loss...
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Thank you
Thank you for sharing your comment. I appreciate it very much.
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A beautiful tribute to your uncle who I am sure would be so very proud of you and this poem. lovely fow or words.
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Bravo young man. A poem uncle Brian would be proud of. I'll have to oe back and read more
Mia
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What a wonderful tribute to your Uncle Brian, this is very beautiful. And you are very talented for a nine year old!
Keep up the great work and lots of luck to you in my contest!
Annie
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Justin, this is a beautiful and very moving poem I am sure
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Dear Justin,
Your Nan and me are dear sister/freinds. We love each other so much! When she hurts I feel it across the waters. I can tell by this finely written acrostic that you dearly loved your Uncle Brian. I am so sorry that he passed away. But, you know what? His spirit of kindness and love will be with you always. Share stories about him, tell people how much you loved him and he loved you. Keep him alive in what you write, as you have so eloquently done with this tribute. I am keeping you and your family in my prayers. I ask that God be your comfort and strength. This is beautiful! Hug you Nan and grandpa as much as possible for me.
Much Love & Blessings ♥
Renee
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Oh Justin how beautiful this is. Your Uncle will be smiling down at you feeling so proud. make sure you keep Nan smiling OK? write her lots of cool funny poem to cheer her up.
Well Done
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My condolences
Dearest Justin. This is a wonderful tribute to your Nan's son and your Uncle Brian. I'm so sorry to hear of your family's loss of Brian and you, Justin, and your Nan and all your family are in my prayers. -
A great job little man, your uncle would have been very proud and honored. I am sure he is looking down on you and Nan with a big smile on his face knowing how much you both loved him. Take care. Steve
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Beautiful Dedication
Thank You for sharing this precious Masterpiece Justin!
My daughter is Tiffany and she is 7 years old...
We are both saddened by what happened..
and wanted to let You know we are thinking about You...
You are very special and have a beautiful Heart!
Tiffany my daughter wanted me to tell You-
"You are brave and smart"
"I Love this poem"...
"Good acrostamistic"
-she really means acrostic-
We both send Love and Hugs your way...
and Thank You for being there for your nanny
and much love~ Desi&Tiffany~*~
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very good
Wonderful poem, Justin. I'm sorry your uncle passed away.
It's important to remember the fun and happy things when people we love pass on. He'll always be inside you with his light guiding you every step of the way. And with your mum, sister, and the rest of your family by your side you don't have to walk it alone which is truly helpful.
Thanks for sharing this. You write well for someone you age.
Keep up the good work.
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Nice, caring and always sharing
A special Angel (lover)
Never rude or mean
Not a tear on some people
You are a very kind nanny
nanny Benecke
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Dear Justin,
I am your Nan's kiwi friend and I kno that you are helping her to keep brave. We are all very sad about your Uncle Brian but he is safe in God's hands now and with others of the family who have been waiting in heaven.
This is a great poem you have written to show how much you loved your Uncle Brian and I bet he is proud of you for writing it.
Kia ora e aroha from Aotearoa (New Zealand.)
Hugh Wyles.
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This is tragic for those who know the story and especially those of use who love your grandmother on this site for she is just such a special person. We are deeply sorry for your loss and anybody who has has even the most remote contact with Joan would be very sad at her and her family's loss.
This is a lovely tribute to a guy who was obviously greatly loved and will be greatly missed- good work
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This was such a wonderful tribute. A great acrostic from one so very young. I enjoyed reading it.
Kari -
This was a very sweet and well written tribute to an apparent V.I.P You did a great job with this and i wish you and yours the best. Amazing piece.
Blessings my dear.
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i'm sure your uncle would just love this so much.
i am sure you made him very proud.
you have done a remarkable job.
keep up the good work.
joyce
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So touching
This is a very special and beautiful tribute to your Uncle. You have an amazing talent and I know that your family is very proud of you.
I am so sorry for your loss and will keep you and your family in my prayers.
What a wonderful nephew you are to do such a loving thing for your Uncle. I am certain he is smiling down on you today!
Blessings! Tammy -
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Darling Justin, nanny and Poppy, Mum and Dad and your Sister Jade, Aunty Sharon and Aunty Julie are very proud of you for writing this beautiful Acrostic for Uncle Brian. You are a very special little boy and we will read this out at Uncle Brian's funeral. And you did it all on your own, nanny only had to help you to post it.
I know Uncle Brian will be reading this and smiling at you.
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