In my head strange thoughts gazing
This empty body is starting to loose control
This soul hungers for the red fluid of life..
Let me taste your blood, come on
Through the dark my eyes can see..
Almost midnight and time is running
My hungry body feels the great need,
to fill itself with your juice of life
Your white skin is blinding me..
My body starts to cry for your soul
This anxiety controls me
Tonight you will be mine
Let me embrace your beauty
I can feel the ancestral thirst
I wanna take you with me for ever..
To hunt and drink the essence of life
And your neck, so white, invites me
Not fear me, I must taste your blood
Your body surrenders to my hunger
We're gonna live in the eternal night
Author notes
Aeternum vitae, hereditare in sanguinis, maledical dominus
I can feel the ancestral thirst, now my eyes see through the dark, we're gonna live in the eternal night.
Written August 26th, 2006
Option 5: For this option I love vampire poem's & stories so that i what i want here, i don't want to hear about vampire's being slain.
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A contest entry
- Fun Filled Contest by Darc Soul.
600 points, ended June 9, 2007, 18 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything && Everything (Shoot me up side the head) --all ages-- by Marilyn..
475 points, ended August 11, 2007, 58 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Vampires by Darc Soul.
600 points, ended August 28, 2007, 27 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Wow! That picture is really seductive, yet really scary at the same time. I think you captured the picture very well, and this is very worthy of the two trophies you've won. I like the pictures you painted, and I could see the vampire enjoying his victim!
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OOooooooois a good word made Nice bloody chills run down then up my Spine. OOoooooooo.
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This is one of the greatest vampire poems I've ever read, it's way better than mine. You should definitly write more like this.
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Thnxs my friend
its good to see you
more often on AP
and thnxs for coming by to read.It is a compliment I take high from a great writer like you are
Are there no contests where we can be a team again you can be the BOSS again
XXJeannette
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This was cool, I have read a few vampire poems and most of the are -so- dumb, but I thought this one is one of the best ones I have read.
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Excellent
This is an awesome vampire write you have here, very sensual and dark. Everything a good vampire write should be. Elegantly penned and good luck in the contest. -
passionate and very sensual piece ..very well done my dear... keep it up !!!!
jamila -
awesome
VAMPIRE...yippppeeee..I love them! U know I am crazy and I aspire to be a vampiress one day and then I will bite ur neck ... (lol) Ok! The poem is fringing awesome...dark , deep and well imagined...speaks out ur words and state of mind so well! I really admire ur style of writing! loved it...good luck for the contest...
Preeti
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excellent presentation
Oooo........this is really well written Jeannette. I like the images you produce with your words here. Very dark and very sensual.
Best wishes in the contest!
Ethereal Melody
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a passionate vampire,about time,awesome!and thanx for advice about that write,too lazy right now but will be fixed later,good eye!
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